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Drunken Jesus - freestyle diss -

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drunken jesus, nothing about us is something equal
its halloween time, bout to get ya face cut up, like pumpkin pieces
you give out a lot of melodies, ill give you at least that..
so for all of illest... now im givin' you a beat, back!
and speaking of ya beats, they a bit borin'
ya give em out for free... cause no one would pay shit for'em
bitch, hold up!.. im COOL.. so don't cry over these
So im never CROSS... but this jesus still dyin' over me (woah)
leave you chockin up hard, broken and scarred
ill flip ya..
cause "JD" only known for shots.. when im "knockin' em back" with coke at the bar!!!
so listen jacki', you wack and im a force that makes beatin's
and quick to cut drunk's short, like a course of AA meetings
so if dude takes "12 steps", ill leave him deceased with cleavers
illest is like an athiest forum.. shit none of us believe in jesus
i know you'll be coming all mad, but il leave ya crumpled up back
im known as a 'god', but now officially... cause im sonning this fag
im a man who buck's top g's, this gay, he blown for something he free's on a whim'
How can this fuck stop me? Dj's only known for puttin' CD's in a spin! (whole line)
so put out ya records, beats, lyrics.. we know all of thats ass
so im quick to put "holes in D" like a great quarter back pass

so i got luck with key's, that's leave some kid's z'd
but im known as a "condom w/rapper"... ITS OBVIOUS YOU DONT FUCK WITH ME
... lmao..

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha that ending was pretty funny, overall it was a decent drop, not sure for the reason of it but it was straight for a freestyle
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Post by precise »

lol not bad, had a few good lines in there, ending i thought was kinda played but if its just a keystyle then no worries
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