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Hearin cries

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Can U love me for what I am? Respect me for what I'm worth
My life been in a Trans since conception, since birth
I've been destined to search, a land where weapon's don't burn
I hold the whole Earth in my hand while I'm stretching its turf
I seek something peaceful, a place where bullets and police don't reach you
Where people will greet you, Trust me I'm Intrigued too
I see life through a different perception, like looking through a mirror
Where I don't get no reflection, my community full of introspective's
See us, we like to kick it, through hard times cuz life's a bitch and
Killin and Stealin is real to us but to them its still illicit
Aint guilty but still convicted, got the doe, but still evicted
It's fucked up aint it? Blood gushed, fainted, dug up a grave
For the Young Buck, guns up, niggas hated how he come up
Slung drugs and made it, others locked up relatin to they capers
And how they fucked up, best get out before U become stuck
So pray for me Reverend, since day One my goal was to make it to Heaven
Im finding myself stray, roaming deranged with these weapons
But wait, I know we all destined to fate, But yours is comin first
Dawg Im destined to wait, I know life and new lessons await
Stressing from Smith and Wessons and Blades
Hopin to get a rest from this place, sometimes Im tired of livin
We all havin something to say, I put mine to rhythm
So pump up the tape, Gutta got something to say
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Post by Def-init »

Another solid drop man.

"Can U love me for what I am? Respect me for what I'm worth
My life been in a Trans since conception, since birth
I've been destined to search, a land where weapon's don't burn
I hold the whole Earth in my hand while I'm stretching its turf
I seek something peaceful, a place where bullets and police don't reach you
Where people will greet you, Trust me I'm Intrigued too "

Very slick!!
Keep them drops comin!
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

pretty dope, kinda seemed poetic in a way too, where u been n e ways, i dont think i seen u around for a while
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Post by - Mutual - »

this had a brilliant flow
as Koms said it was very poetic
and it was just great i mean
the flow and tone of the first two lines
set the rest and probably makes people stick with it
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Gutta »

thank yall i appreciate it

uppin
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