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I Am American #3

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Metaphors, credit scores, pathetic wars
I know the economy I'm headed for
honestly, I split the risk, predominately
while takin perspiciatis cash flow hits
its a phenomenally frivolous comedy
when capitalists conquer me constantly
those who are fastest to get the assets
win, it reminds me of Indianapolis 500 classics
my death is my last bet, I'll cash that check
pass that debt onto my children like a rolex
sold through opex on a next generation OS
I'm no less possessed to be a success than the next
stressed out mess that sits in the desk in his office
watching the rest of his bosses
drive away in their lex, while he packs his boxes
like fed ex, with less money he is reporting anually
working a dead end job to best support his family
so, they aint as poor as the rain forest
the chorus of his life is cordless like a mic
how enormous is the price when you can't afford a pen to write
with no end in sight like men who fight
in iraq, then they say you can make it, how I am suppose to answer?
like the women trying to get healthcare, diagnosed with cancer
I am american, I am swearing in to the constitution
my contract with absolution, the facts are proven
I'm back to using punches, a fast solution
mass pollution has our heads trapped in this glass illusion
we are past confusion, living in this wack delusion

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Post by drunken jesus »

hulkamaniacs unite
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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This Was Coo Plex,
Had Some Good Multis.. A Lil Meanin..
Punches Was Aight...
Real Short...

You Know u Can Come harda lol
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Tru Dat ..
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Post by precise »

i thought the beginning n end were sick, the middle was ok but fell off a bit

lol i love the way u write dude, its never really forced just flows smooooth
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