Thunderous Verses

[complexity]

The Vertic-Is, I'm A Calculated Word-Smith ||
With Verses, Only Seen In Foreign Manu-Scripts ||
The Fbi Dreams, Of How They Can Handle-This ||
Semantics Spits, With Thousands Of Consistant-Hits ||
To Get The Advantage, I'll Flip The Whole Planet ||
The World Will Be Frantic, Living In The Atlantic ||
Swimming To Land, Which Is Virtually All Quick Sand ||
Everyone In Panic, I Have Managed To Plan B4 Hand ||
According To Inertia If I Stayed Under The Surface ||
I'd Practice As The Earth-Flips "My Thunderous Verses" ||
No Wonder Their Worthless, I Remain Under The Earths Belt ||
Hundreds A Curses, Aimed At The Devil Himself ||
I'm Under Hell, Laughing As The First People Melt ||
Heads Tooken Off As The Largest Steeple Fell ||
I Cursed This Evil Spell, To Release Hell ||
Streets Turn To Beaches, Fire Burns The Preechers ||
Some Try To Speak To Jesus, As Their Heart Seizes ||
Leaders Become Bleeders, With Tons Of Diseases ||
These Heated Kids Run With The Guns From Polices ||
Trees Are Ripped Into Pieces, This Is My Thesis ||
Sea-Pits Are Deep As Volconas, Fire Explodes ||
Turning Bus Loads Of Foes Over Onto Older Roads ||
My Foes Are Soldiers Holding Deadly Cobras ||
Boldiers Come Down On Towns, Bouncin ||
So Many Killings People Stopped Counting ||
Familys Drowning, As The Entire Ground-Spins ||
Hurricanes And Twistas Surrounding Them ||
One Man Gets Picked Up N Wont Be Found Again ||
He Was Thrown On Top Of A Mountain ||
The Sound Of Death Pounding Heads ||
Earth-Quakes, Leave The Ground In Shreds ||
This Is As Fucked Up As Profound Gets ||

[precise]

ahh dope, ok i was thinkin it was strange as far as somethin youd drop as a written, but its for audio, should work well its got good imagery and decent flow.

[-TraMaTiK-]

"These Heated Kids Run With The Guns From Polices ||
Trees Are Ripped Into Pieces, This Is My Thesis || ''

my fav part^ shitz krazy man nice work i didnt really c nuthin wrong with it and if u said its practice well gud practice! lol keep it up --1--

[drunken jesus]

pretty nice, flow was choppy in some parts

hit me up when you finish recording it

[complexity]

true, thanks for the feedback