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Plex ft. Ekoms, cise, dom, micz, arv - Dangerous Cypher

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Domino: rolling a jay, strolling away into the lightning, time to ride it, im psyched i don't need to rhyme shit so im just gnna take stabs in the dark like a blind bitch

Arvincible2k8: my flow exciting, electrically shockin, ill rape a bitch, wearing ya grandmother's stockin, crazy psychopath, destroyin every dyke with wrath, screamin fuck michael jack

Complexity: sin, I'm the work of satan his most perverted creation, I'm waiting to start converting the nation, taking ecstasy as the earth is shakin, complexity has skeletons in his closet darker than kurses basement, I must be missing-my-mind, oh shit, its probably cuz I'm gripping-this-nine

Ekoms: i'm steady flippin-a-line ...a hidden-design is just another description-of-mine while im scriptin-to-find myself rippin-behind the shelves like a gas leak liftin-to-climb, haha..wat can i say...i'm sick-in-the-mind, having every single fucking thought written-to-rhyme

Complexity: I'm to twisted-to-find to wicked-to-sign, my rhyming-is-fatal, record companies would rather pay me under the table than to sign-me-to-a-label, and you know what, writing is the part I most-like-to-do, but I'd never outshine myself when I ghost-write-for-you

Precise: true u could try n step-ta-me.. but regretably uve yet-ta-be blessed-with-heat, im hatefull.. yes-indeed, pollutin the air just so uve got less-ta-breathe, my lyrics caress-a-beat,the way im blessin-free's could impress-a-priest

Complexity: Precise your dope, the rest are weak, Millz rest in peace, Illest ready for the definitive Millz Diss, it's finna get real sick, if I'm ever crushed or flattened, I won't conceal it, I'll say, I've had enough of rapping, I won't get slapped and act as if nothing happened, you'll never touch my passion, I'll bet you rock a chain with a peace, he is so ghetto but I'll drop "pocket change" in the streets, and that will be my next murder

Domino: none can stretch further than my verse's-limits-sir, took two laps round the universe's-perimiter, im bigger than it's outline, and it's about-time the tyrant-is-back, sick of faggots-trying-to-rap, im rising-from-ash excersizing-my-wrath, took me two months to reach-the-top, eversince then the heat's-been-off, yet never descended, im still fresh-in-minds, ive stood the test-of-time, and that shit just proves im still the best-with-rhymes

Precise: ill destroy ya chest-n-spine so easily ill even impress-the-prime text heads-with-lines,, kids are like..." christ-is-that..shit it is, CisE-is-back!" my mentality aint changed, sittin here thinkin "the net-is-mine"

Complexity: emcees respect my grind, although they think difficult syllables, he is too complex to rhyme, lines affect your mind, I got to be gentle-with-students or find your brains ventricles-useless, when the central-tubes-split, from accidental-movements, that sends-pollutents, removing all mental-improvements

Ekoms: don't make me get technical-too-bitch, cuz i'll cut u open with a medical-tool-kit, i'll take ya armless body and attach tentacles-to-it, now all ur missin is ink..so i'll stuff a tube in u n fill ya with chemical-fluids

Precise: ill mimic the rhymescheme n stencil-tha-two-kids spittin so hard ill splinter ya pencil-ta-toothpicks, its a crude-spit rappin

Complexity: foolish, clapping tools with heat, I'll do what the government won't do school the street, precise n plex bring heat, we dice the best, fight with text, write complex, we're a righteous mess, give psychics stress cuz our lifes a wreck, in 10 years we'll be beating our wifes to death, we bite your neck and instantly ice your flesh, we'll wreck the nicest set, burn the mic with sweat and still keep it fresh, precise is the secret guest, and who is really matching me? God? that is fucking blasphemy

Precise: typin a catastrophy for the rappers after-me, were the ones to master-beats n shatter-beefs

Complexity: i splatter enemies mentally, and you'll ain't gangster, I researched extensively

precise: fuck who kids pretend-ta-be well be-endin-these weak emcees, out rhymin whoever is sent-ta-me

Complexity: I'm against police, for violence, less snitching and more silence, against peace, for tyrants, less religion, and more science

Ekoms: evil geniuses back-at-it-again, 'complex' enough to attack-rap-with-the-sin n mathematically-win, im trapped-in-this-skin, take the needles to "crack"-addicts-with-pins, STABBIN-THEM, straight-in-their-ABDOMEN, goin from asian-to-AFRICAN cuz of the LACK-OF-JIN, dude's a "moron"..like a diver with 'no' "oxy"-'Jin' i'll example where my flow-stops-to-fin, even show where the drops-begin, similar to bodies on the road..full of lead like blocks-of-tin, see i even spit in a window, or a thread,..shit even a box-or-bin, even in prison..where i cause the locks-to-spin

Complexity: every day I take the abuse of boxing, I only lose when I choose not to win, and you all can see, I don't use that option, I don't see the future stopping him, the booth is rocking cuz the truth is dropping, I'm like a J Dilla DVD, i got producers watching, even my pencil is producing toxins, i've been hung out to dry so much, they gotta get the nooses off him, I have fire in hand with a nice-scheme, ekoms is a mic-fiend, tearing it up like a night-scene, beating us can only been through a pipe-dream, all your dreams are like windows being wiped-clean, we are a hype-team, that will leave you froze in a box like ice-cream

Ekoms: u might-scream, cuz we're hot enough to boil u till ya look like white-steam, escapin the box like the homeless-gettin-rich, tryna run but ur dome-is-gettin-hit when i throw-this-written-diss, they focus,-spit-n-wish like hokus pokus but they notice they're still broke-as-shit-n-piss

Arvincible: Impervious, Obliteratin is My purpose, kind words but beneath the surface im murkin, commit murders, won't stop till I hit the top, i'm just beginning to crack the surface, imma hit 50 like smackin curtis

Complexity: lacking purpose, Illest still rocks, so fuck ill hop, I'm not hating, I'm just saying we still hot, while flowing the best, holding a tech, with 5 uncontrollable vets, causing unknowable death, leaving hoes as an emotional mess

Arvincible: Ill dig a hole on ya chest, and bury the blade, gettin big off this shit the way Im carryin weight, ur just in a hurry to wait, like rushin to ya death, ur fate is to die by my hands, fingertips apply and demand, call me a fuckin injury how im quick to retire a man

Ekoms: correction..i dont fiend for mics i fiend-for-battles, wipe out a hood and clean-the-shadows, cuz u know emcees lurk in the dark thievin-rap-flows, sucks i know..."life's a bitch" like a breathin-ASSHOLE,

Complexity: we are back with a cocky-grin, and an deceitful-smile, to defeat-your-style, been convicted of evil and we beat-the-trial, breaking down what c-meant is like destroying a concrete-pile, as I paraphrased a few rhymes I used before, this is a music war, I'm giving you the exclusive tour, allow me to reintroduce the corp, we have Ekoms, the reason God made a future for, micz the super bore, precise who slowed on rapping and started producing more, arvicible, if you battle him you'll need PC like a computer store, domino a ruthless bastard, and complex the truest rapper, who is after when we just opened the final and newest chapter

16 Micz: can you imagine wakin up to nothin but water in your house
no lights, no food, no cars, the things u were already strugglin about
imagine wakin up to the sound of the police bustin in your house
shootin your brother in the mouth, while your mother is gone hangin out
what if you were starvin, weighin barely over 80 pounds
the sight of that would make you frown, its wild...
cause the sight of violence always makes you smile
but now, it all changes when we tryna make them thous'
life is all gravy til them sirens makin sounds
everybody fakin frowns, til u start hatin clowns
and you comptemplate on doin that snitchin u was hatin now
now the world is shakin now, you twirled and made it out
only to find that theres problems in the world no one can dream about
but when the rappers bring it out, slaps america in the mouth
they all stand in shock, too embarassed of their sprouts
too embarassed to sing it out, hip hop will sing it proud
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Re: Plex ft. Ekoms, cise, dom, micz, arv - Dangerous Cypher

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complexity wrote:Precise: "the net-is-mine"
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Shit Was ill ..
Nothin More Nothin Less ..
it Was Tha Cypher Of Tha Year imo ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Haz »

Deffinitley a Sick Cypher..
Liekd How Precise Was in Dat shit..
IMO Precise And Plex Kill't It...
I Aint See How Micz Lil Cyph Verse Even Fit in.
Domino Went hard For The Few Lines he Spit..

Lookin FOrward fa More ....
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Post by MagicMark »

wouldnt soil myself over this piece.. alot of big names.. but it wasnt crazy good..

rhyming and multis where good for the msot part, tho some seemed force, like people trying to compete and got in over their heads.. i respect people who are able to freestyle (i doubt this is exactly what it was... but jus' saying lol) so i aint gonna hate out and out.. but some rhymes where forced, no real high power impact lines, alot of cool ones dont get me wrong.. but i never reeally said "oh shit" etc..

complexity came correct - ekoms came pretty hot - subsist was nice, the others didnt really get as big a look in.. still cool but not on that higher tier..

some rhymes where a lil simple - some plays where a little off... the good point where alot of people could learn multis and rhyming from this.. its a good starting point.. some clean shit.. ekoms lack of jin para was pretty hot, complexities last one was cool too, precises first one was cool.. and he had the potential to be up there but didnt see as much, same with arv

mic's last paragraph seemed a little out of tone with the rest of the piece lol, which made it stand out, it was alright, but again nothing crazy..

this seemed like a punch of good writters together.. writin' and putting down some thoughts while using rhymes more complex than the average writter.. this could have been alot better and im sure most of ya'll know it.. is seems like a little writing exercise with no real purpose..

overall for most people id give it an 8.10.. for the faults listed, and multis and rhyming aint my favourite to see.. but cause ya'll are the "higher tier" of the site.. ill give it a 7/10.. as i was expectin a little more unity and crisper lines..

so.... cool shiz..
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Post by precise »

it was for shits n giggles lol, i was drunk, dom was stoned, n knowing plex he was probably drunk as well haha
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i liked this

ive never been in a cypher so i dont know how quick these things work but if that was really off the top then it was dope. everyone flowed nicely and multis were top notch.

Ekoms and Plex stood out. party coz they wrote more but also i thought their shit was a little above the rest. Domino, Precise and Arv all came nice too.

dont know what the fuck a random 16 Micz verse was thrown in at the end for tho. it didnt fit in at all but in saying that, Micz verse was pretty dope and would of been better dropped as a solo.

anyway props everyone did well
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Post by complexity »

Yah, everything was off the dome. The whole idea worked OK, basically it was like cypher tag, where I'd just have someone else spit, but everyone went on brb or signed off.

Ekoms verses were from a past cypher.

Thanks for the feedback.

Ekoms: Killed the multis and flips

Precise: Had two nice punches

Domino: I liked his verse, it was strong and flowed nice

16 Micz: LMAO, this verse was from a collab we were suppose to do last year and I always make fun of him about the last line, so I finally posted it randomly, lmao.

Arvincible: Overall pretty solid, could have came stronger but you were busy.

Of course, bar the fact that this is a cypher and not written rhymes.
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lol i liked how u pieced it all together to flow like that, cuz i was wondering... when the fuck did i ever cypher with all of them, haha but yea good shyt
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lol yea it was interestin, he kinda collaborated everyone, randomly would drop me what someone wrote in msn then id write a quick follow up, im guessin thats what he did with everyone

btw, it would be pretty cool to get a big site cypher happenning in the chatroom with as much people as we can get, itd be a good time
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Yes, it would.
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too bad when ppl get on the chatroom they just tend to...well, chat. lol

lets set up a good date and we'll get it done
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yea im down with an actual cypher, it would fit together a lot better also if i can see the person's drop to flow off of, im back in florida so i got the net right now, viral's net was out for a bit(and still is i believe) so i wasn't able to get on much but im on now so whenever anyone wants to collab or cypher hit me up, im not audio-capable at the moment but i will be in about 2-3 weeks from now
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