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Cypherish... feat. H20

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id appreciate opinons and feed on this little cypher i did with my boy H20...

called Cypherish (top song on my myspace)

http://www.myspace.com/jollyjayh20
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dey is alright i be back to give proper feed l8tr
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Young K »

the first buhl kinda reminds me of slick rick...lol

but this is pretty good if you were really just chypering...

flow was nice for both of you, lyrics were there...

nothing bad to say about the track...

i'll probably listen to the rest of your tracks later...

stay up
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Post by JollyJay »

thaks ppl


uppin for more feed?
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Post by Kurse »

Interesting beat of choice. I'd fuck wit it.
Not a bad flow...for having such interesting accents, it went along with the beat pretty well and the flow was nice. Lyrically good...pretty nice. Drop. Also the mixing was very exceptional. This shit would make very good mixxtape material.
Keep droppin.
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Post by JollyJay »

thanks man.


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Post by Lil Munny »

Nice reggae beat you got going there. :)
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Post by MicJordan »

cant say much about the writing, but the beat is alright
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Post by precise »

lol i agree with dude who said the first guy sounds like slick rick, u austrailian? i loved the flows by both, smooth, n not humdrum, yer voices are really animated, well mixed as kurse said, this'll go on my mp3 player dude i enjoyed it
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Post by HKX »

nice track nigga shit is not bad beat was different keep droppin nigga 1
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Post by JollyJay »

props on all the listens ppl!
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