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All killa diss, u soft nigga.

Post by Street Pharmacist »

every where i seem to go this nigga follows/
u like me nigga? u want me to put u to swollow/
fucking fag i let u feel-on my hollows/

i dont got no fucking time to be baby sitting/
and in ur girls mouth thats where my baby's be sitting/

u be going evry where i go,but still cant follow my tail/
what? u cant compare a jaguar to a snail/
why u dick riding me with out a helmet u should go to jail/
and by the time u in there ill rob u n evrybody u know so it aint gonna be no bail (haha)/
if not ill chop ur fucking head off for christmas send it to ur moms in the mail/
so she could see ur face all fried like u fell face first on the rail/
u could try writing back but u just gonna fail/

i use basics words/
that will kill this herb/

im that nigga that u cant defeat/
ill stomp u out and make u part of the concrete/
so dont think evrything sweet/
cuz once u see that black jeep creep/
u better run and burn ur feet/
and take fleet/
ima hop out bucking the heat/
cuz i stay havin it stashed,right under the seat/
right when it rips threw ur flesh is gonna be looking like spaghettis and meat/

u would of wished that u was straped/
with the gat/
when the green line go flat/

i think ima end up choking this nigga/
i need a nicotine patch im addicted to smoking these niggas/
ill snatch his dream away leave no hope in this nigga/

i always tell the truth even when i lie/
and ima stay with my pride till the day that i die/

i know holloween is coming he already actin like the thug/
like he cant get muged/
and get 4 in his mug/

hes sad cuz his whole life he never been loved/
u could be looking over ma casket/
and ima still be above/

all killah/
chill before i get all of my killers/
to turn up ur screws a notch with the fucking drillers/

he cant pass/
the past/
when he got harrased/
so thats why he still living with a mask/

u living a life with out entity/
so theres no reason to taking ur identity/

so ima tell u 1 more time before i set off my clip/
nigga GET OFF MY DICK!.
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Post by 8th »

just stop.
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

8th wrote:just stop.


CONGRATULATIONS!! ur the first hater to comment, how does it feel?
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Post by 8th »

what exactly are you trying to accomplish with these 'disses'? Why not try writing and droping open mics and elevate, instead of embarrassing yourself. fall back kid.
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

uhm u fall back im not dissing u ok unless u want it to cuz i really dont give fuck...and if i was embarrasing my self i would of neva droped the diss, with ur dick sucking camel lips.
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Post by 8th »

o......k......

your 15, right?
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Post by precise »

im not going to leave a hater comment.. even tho you suck

battle me, or stop dropping these lame disses

oops, my bad, sorta a hater comment huh? LMAO
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fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Invincible »

This had its up and downs but it still had some badass lines. If you would have took out all the weak lines that didn't really get any where and re-wrote it this would of been a straight knockout.

every where i seem to go this nigga follows/
u like me nigga? u want me to put u to swollow/
fucking fag i let u feel-on my hollows/

i dont got no fucking time to be baby sitting/
and in ur girls mouth thats where my baby's be sitting/

i think ima end up choking this nigga/
i need a nicotine patch im addicted to smoking these niggas/
ill snatch his dream away leave no hope in this nigga/
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Post by drunken jesus »

this was even wacker than the first diss, you got 3 bars you ain't even getting your own thread

if you keep on dropping these wack disses in this section i'm just gonna start closing them nobody wants to go back and forth dissing your wack ass ekoms only did it cause he was bored lmao
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Conspiracy »

Well wow the shit invis pointed out was whack and he rhymed the same word you're a real lyrical genius....
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Post by drunken jesus »

^hahahaha i wasn't gonna even comment on that cause i thought invisible was being sarcastic or something
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

... im not so sure if invisible is serious or not...but now that i know who demented is.. im not surprised his verses r so weak... im pretty sure the last time he rapped was a few months ago with me and tom in a cypher i posted here... and before that i think he was on a 10 yr retirement plan... little left to say about him now
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