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R.I.P the V.I.P

Post by Cee4 »

Fuck V.I.P

When ma lyrical shots blow,
Youngin you will stay short u will not grow
My off the top hot flow will knock the top of ya torso
Like Daniel Pearl you can die as my hostage
Bury ya head in the sand, u 'aint fly' like an ostrich!
Like chicks with no bra, you 'aint strapped'!
I dunno what the fuck u are but you aint rap
Like bottled beer your nobodys 'draft pick!
Like a hypochondriac, u aint ill, u act sick!
In danger, like 'witch executions', death is the stake!
Like life support machine, with every breath u are fake!
I`ll get your IP, find where in Tulsa u stayin
Go get ma buddy, leave him impaled in ya brain!
My rhymes are concrete, your Play Doh rap!
You 'invite your humiliation' like a Sado Mach!
Like 'Eminem sketches' I can do you Martial Arts (Marshall)
Take a Samurai to ya limbs n leave you partial parts!
I`ll stab ya fuckin eyes out, oh you aint get the presage
Use ya mamas corpse as Braille to let ya get the message!
Tatooed tears?
A joker`s the only card u been dealt, i've had this harder
Blinkin? On my 'plane you would melt' like Travis Barker!
Claimin u gangster, aint been behind them sin gates
Ya spins ate,
Dick in Millz asshole`s the only time ur 'in-mates!'
Fuck goals, leave this 'pussy popped'' like he on the pole!
Fuck rock n roll, call me James Brown how I 'own the soul!'
That's right bitch, I`ll annihilate your soul
When im done grab ya sister, violate her hole!
Which one? Pick one? Ass cunt or mouth?
Make u watch but when you gasp tongues come out!
Send it to ya folks, now u left with just a mouth ulcer!
Who`s city got a crime rate? I hear no one shout Tulsa!
Fuck ya farmhouse crew, your whole squad are pansies!
I`ll show Tulsa how to 'cook the beef' like Gordon Ramsay!
Like ya pops occupation, your “hedgingâ€
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Post by Haz »

Big Upz.. Dis Seemed Like a Quick Key Up But You Off'd Dis Niggah.
Rest In Peace To Dis Dood...

This Was Sorta Weighin Out ... It Aint Shift To One Side
Im not Gunna say It Was Complete Fire.. Or it Was Trash.. it Was Far
From Trash.. you jus Had some Lines that Were Played And i Wus Feelin

Bury ya head in the sand, u 'aint fly' like an ostrich!
Like chicks with no bra, you 'aint strapped'!

Dat Shit was jus Sooo Below ya Standards My dood im Sure U Realize it..

Anyways..


Dick in Millz asshole`s the only time ur 'in-mates!' < LMFAO


Murda...


Big upz... Keep At it.. Vip LoL u a Bitch..
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Post by precise »

being as im in the VIP kill list club, i had to check this out lmao

good shit, ya could tell from the structure of it that it was put together quick, the sick lines were non-stop tho, some of them i could see commin but were still presented nice

the "in mates" line was nice lmao
i liked the martial arts one too, its simple but.. i never wouldve thought of it! lol

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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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thanks for the feed back
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