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Post by J-Majikk »

song i produced for my lil homie yung soja. been gettin props for it so i decided to post the beat up . leave much feedd
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its aight, the mixing on its really bad you can't hear the synth note from the opening much at all & farther into the track and on the break where the extra low note kicks it(i dunno if its a kick or a tom) the bass distorts and sounds horrible i think the bass may be distorting the vocal clip too or it may be just a bad quality clip i dunno i can't really tell what its saying

one thing i notice your beats lack is a structure theres no real verse or hook sections which is cool for just a beat but most mcs want something structured, you should work on adding more melodys and harmonys too your drum switchups are usually good but the melodys and what not rarely switchup which kinda gets repetative

i can give you some basic tips on mixing so your shit sounds better if your interesting just get at me
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by PIRATEPRODUCTIONS »

alrite........ u composed nice man its got a good rhythm and flow...... when it comes to producin you need get a bit harder and try to bang it up, it was a clean feel tho man its got a shit loada potential keep workin it thingz can only better
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