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The Crow Road

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inspired By My Past Addictions, Current Lifestyle And Master Of Puppets What What Nigger Choke On This!

u Chose ur Path, u Follow Even Though ur Facing-Destruction ..||
Pulls u in, ur Body Says No But ur Brain is Embracing-The-Suction ..||
u Feel So Great, But So Wrong, Like Sleeping-With-Brides ..||
ur Smile is Fixed in Position But ur Subconscious is Weeping-inside ..||
Life is Playing in Fast Forward, There's No Time-To-Think ..||
in Bed One Second Then u Find Yourself Ready To Buy-That-Drink ..||
On This Track, Life's Catching Upto u, u Know ur Sanity's-Thinning ..||
Finally Stop To Catch ur Breath, But The Race Once Again-is-Beginning ..||
a Vicious Circle Of Life...
Descends into a Downward Spiral, Follow The Track-To-The-Drop ..||
Like a Helter Skelter 'When i Get To The Bottom i Go Back-To-The-Top' ..||*
The Ride Starts Over, The Black Hole in The Centre-Consumes-u ..||
This Ain't No Eye Of The Storm, When u Enter it's Set-To-Entomb-u ..||
Gambling ur Life it's Upto u Whether u Fight-The-Force ..||
Some Are Drawn To The Shit Like Moths To a Lighting-Source ..||
Which Light Are u Headed For? Does Motivation Outweigh-Temptation? ..||
The Crow Road Runs Shorter Everyday Like ur Frayed-Elation ..||
Will u Turn Around, And Not Stop Running Till This Rut-is-Through ..||
This is ur Life ur Racing, Are u Gnna Let it Catch Upto-u? ..||

*Beatles Song 'Helter Skelter' Contains The Line 'When i Get To The Bottom i Go Back To The Top' Chyeahhh.

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Bitch We're Doing a Remix To Down On The Farm, Even if One Of Us Dies!

Edit: Delete ur Comment And Make Me Look Like a Weirdo Then Why Don't u. :(
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Post by Khan »

yo this shit was nice man, makes you sit back and think about shit, some of the choices you made in life and shit, i enjoyed it, good read...cats werre all good just saying cats cause i dont feel like saying wordplay and shit..hope you drop more shit like this.
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Post by Khan »

and my bad for the back-to-back "shits" i said in that ^.^ lmao.


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Post by Haz »

That Was fire DOm..
you really got on somethin otha shit with this...
Maaad props For that..
I Liked how SOmethin You Did Inspired You..
The Crow Road..

This shit was real Man.. Keep it comin
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Thanks Dudes.
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Post by MagicMark »

cool shiz man, not gonna hate, it was good..

i wouldnt call it fire... some of the phrases i.e. "once again is beginning" etc, seems to be stretched to just fit the multis, i was also expecting a little more description and more impact which i didnt feel i got in abundance..

good points where for the most part multis where solid, subject was personal, several nice plays and cool flow..

overall good shiz.. keep droppin this stuff man..
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Post by Cee4 »

This is the first drop from you on a serious topic that ive read in a while.
It was pretty good. As expected it was a smooth read and the multis were their as usual. althought it was a more "serious" verse there was a couple of good punchlines in their such as the bride one. only thing the verse lacked was a couple of stand out bars.

u Chose ur Path, u Follow Even Though ur Facing-Destruction ..||
Pulls u in, ur Body Says No But ur Brain is Embracing-The-Suction ..||
u Feel So Great, But So Wrong, Like Sleeping-With-Brides ..||
ur Smile is Fixed in Position But ur Subconscious is Weeping-inside ..||

^^^
probably my favourite bars
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Life is Playing in Fast Forward, There's No Time-To-Think ..||
in Bed One Second Then u Find Yourself Ready To Buy-That-Drink ..||
On This Track, Life's Catching Upto u, u Know ur Sanity's-Thinning ..||
Finally Stop To Catch ur Breath, But The Race Once Again-is-Beginning ..||
a Vicious Circle Of Life...
Descends into a Downward Spiral, Follow The Track-To-The-Drop ..||
Like a Helter Skelter 'When i Get To The Bottom i Go Back-To-The-Top' ..||*
The Ride Starts Over, The Black Hole in The Centre-Consumes-u ..||
This Ain't No Eye Of The Storm, When u Enter it's Set-To-Entomb-u ..||

dude..mad nice^^ a DEEPER side of Domino. exactly what i was hopin for. keep that fucking shit up man,,most definetly. nice work overall keep droppin

p.s. feed trust no one in creation chamber,ty.
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