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HKX
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Post by HKX »

Lil sumthin dat I came up with, u kno dat feelin u get when u jus wanna go 2 another place when ur goin thru shit, bein stressed, feelin depressed dis is wat da track is bout 4rm my point of view. Leave a nigga sum feed and i'll do da same 4 u niggaz stay up 1.



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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

to be honest i wasnt really feelin this as much as your other hits man. not to say this was wack, but i didnt really like the beat much. you stayd on topic you were tryin to reach and flow was str8 an all i jus wasnt feelin on it. not sure im kinda confused about this one dude. lyrics were dope, maybe try layin it down over another beat?

big ups 2 u tho
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by MagicMark »

wow -

i was feeling this beat lol, different opinions i guess, it was catchy, and the raspy saxophone/guitar type thing gave it that dream type feel, as did the violin things lol, hook is tight, solid verses, some cool lines, rode the beat really well, flow hot. the message behind the piece was cool too..not too much i could suggest too improve it - the intro was just all scratchy? that was the onyl annoying bit, overall a cool song - 8/10

keep doing..
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Post by Subsist »

yeah i liked the beat too. good job dude this must be your best track.
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Post by Young K »

this is my type of music...
and some rappers would have a hard time riding this, but you did it great...
lyrics were tight...
etc...
i can dig it...

8.5/10

stay up
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