Swagger like me - Freestyle

[MagicMark]

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Who else got the swag like mag-ic?
he savage, and ya'll need a ladder to average..
take rap, you can have it, cause imma bound to be rollin'
shit ive mastered this game, time to put down the controller
i astound all the posers, if you not sound, then its over
if ya'll got open minds, then imma fuck around and close em'
flow's so ridicolous, like ridilin for syphillus
check out my new pad, dawg, tha's really where your bitches is
Punches so hot, got it feelin' like hell's kitchen did
and your just "short change", like all im dealin' with is 50's kids
...fuck

lets switch it up..

i take ya bitch to a place, where there's double showers built in
so lets jus' say, she puts the ho in ho-tel like she was paris hilton (...)
she bouncin' like she leavin' me, but you know she's still between the sheets
and she beggin' me for more, so my dick movin' faster than knievels wheels
deceiven' me? my boys thought.. "she couldn't have had that good a ass"
She also Claimed she had D's, but theres no test that they wouldn't pass...

ha..

lets get by to the topic, im hot like the tropics
my flow is a force n' bitch you not gonna stop it
so no fakers allowed, the crowd proud, im taking the crown
cause i hold it down and keep it there like im making you drown
breakin' you down, you aint a G', so stop it you lames
claming you own houses? yeah right.. not even monopoly games
you've got to be slain, get the nurse to bandage all ya femurs
Big spendin' no doubt... i got more cribs than brad and angelina...


G?

you know me, im the kid that make bullet sprays, pull at veins
"Paper you nigga's", cause all you feelin' is lead, till you dead or jus' full a pain
im iller mayne, got a gorrilla frame, banana clips sink into ya like damaged ships
alot are claiming tighter swagger, but so far NONE of ya'll have managed it
i say fuck you to the management, but with the paper ill be happy to to deal
And i gotta lotta haters, cause my cheques keep growin' zero's like their famiyl trees...
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.. fuck.. im out..

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

This Was Decent Fam, a lot Of Lame / Okay Punches ..
Only a Couple Were Hot to Me ..
Tha 50 Line Was Funny ..
Umm That Ho-tel Joint Was Corny as Fuck ..
I Guess it Was Koo For a Freestyle ..
Try & Stay away From That Ho-tel Line ..
Unless U Pull it off Nicer Than That ..

[MagicMark]

lol thanks, whats wrong with the ho-tel line?, thought it was nice...

hotel-hilton reference was nice imo..

ah well lol..

[Haz]

You Had a Few Coo Punchlines Homie...
I Feel Like When U Put ya Mind 2 It.. You Come Alot Nicer..
But That's Why This is a Free.. Anyways..
Keep Tryna Freestyle you'll Get On Point Trust Me..
I Liked The Reference To 50's Kid Lmfao.. Dat Shit was Funny..

Keep It Up Cudd..

[Arvincible]

This was dope IMO

i liked the presence u brought and the subliminals were cool
u really gotta put that shit on audio so i can hear how u want it to sound wit the beat lol

good shit though mark

8.5/10