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Im Not Sorry

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Its not like I refuse it but u don't need to come up with excuses or tell me what the use is
Its useless, and if we keep it up and I get angry, it'll just seem that I'm abusive
Cuz truth is, im tired of going through this and im now done, and I know now that u doubt some
But im sure if you let me let it out some, I can say that you control much of the outcome.
The hopes run, u seem too far to hold, the shape of our loves gotten way too hard to mold
And every night I feel tears start to roll cuz I feel it when u come to hug me now ur arms are cold
My heart's too far from home, I had to think it through all night, to make sure the decision was all right
I don't want u in my whole life, cuz ur the scold type to be cold like no light on an old pipe,
Ur selfishness was heartless and look where it got us, all I wanted was for u to be loving and honest...
Like no commas, you said u would never try to hurt me..period. But u even broke THAT promise!
Im not sorry..Damn...now there seems no choice other than to throw it away and just quittin,
Fuck! Cuz as much as I hate to admit it, its gone far too late to just fix it....I just hate this commitment.
It was ur amusement with rejection, refusal to acceptance that's grown its course from the very start
I thought we'd take the chance to make it work but still it hurt so now its forced us to fall apart...
It seems the relationship was worthless, it didn't seem to serve a purpose like I prayed Babe,
You had to have games played, as I tried u let it die after slowly watching the flames fade
So tell me..why did u leave it so? Was it pride u had to show so that I had to lift the load?
Was it much to ask to forget the past or let it pass to make this last cuz instead u let this go!!
You were so stubborn..rubbing...whatever u had on me to watch me crumble into nothing
I was happy with ur loving, but passed time n u showed bad signs of behavior that was ugly
Was it worth it? To see me crawling and hurtin? What the fuck did I do to deserve it?!
Was it bad service? I don't see the purpose...we're only humans neither of us were perfect...
Im beginning to be sure, I can't do this anymore, u said the ocean wouldn't accept me before
But I can see there's plenty in store past what u blinded me with in your emptiest shore...
There's more...fish in the sea, I don't have to be the one that you would punish for glee
No more torturing me, cuz to u everything had a fee, u couldn't even pay attention for free...
So fuck this, im no longer feeling this shit, im not playing, this is as real as it gets!
Im done dealin with it, find somebody else to lose their selves so they can heel to ur whip..

im out
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Post by - Mutual - »

man this seemed to have a good flow the multies were'nt bad um i'll give u proper feed sum point l8tr i'm in a rush right now good shit tho
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Like I Told U On aim Fam ..
You Gettin Way Better ..
I Liked Tha Flow ..
Multies On Point ..
Tha Emotion Was There, I Felt Wat U Were Goin Thru ..
We`ve all Been There Man ..Lol
Not Tha Easiest Shit ya Know ..
But Keep ya Head Up Fam ..
I Got You
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by HKX »

damn nigga nice nicely done emotion on point than a muthafucker son shit reminds of dis track i did wit my cousin G called It Was U http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/it-wa ... t8080.html
sum females r jus krazy dawg they misunderstand niggaz sumtimes stay up and keep droppin ur emotional shit is ur best work nigga cuz niggaz could feel dat shit feel me
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Post by Arvincible »

I appreciate the feed famz and hkx ill peep ur as soon as I get on a comp...


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This needs more feed...
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Post by MesaR »

<i> deffo good shit arv, i liked the concept.. inners helped out the structure and flow because i thought it was abit long.. abit dragged on but deff getting the emition through, keep dropping bruv.. reckion you could feel my drop hobo life in the scriptures? </i>
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