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Post by Arvincible »

SAW up ..R.Son.All..

S.A.W Up, Cops Tryna Get Mah Boys For Malice, R.I.P is Tha Type Of Dudes That Got More Noise Than Talent,
Ya Flows is Shattered, Two Leaders Battled, Only Time They "Voting Hazard" is "Tryna Destroy Tha Ballots" ..
But Wait! U Niggas Say Who`s Tha Best? S.A.W, Type to Have U Choose ya Death ..
When They Shots Were Fired This Loser Left, Now it`s Like "Shit Stains On Brides" Who "Duc3 in Dress" ..
Who U Dudes impress? Not S.A.W!, Cus We Spit Flames To Chumps, Get Tamed & Slumped ..
Wanna Be Better? Bitch Change ya Wants, Cus i`ll Leave "Magic Rocked" Like "Criss Angel Stunts" ..
Dang, i Got Goons To Have Tha AK Clappin Him, They`ll Holla May Day at They Kins ..
R.I.P? Haz U Tha Boss Of it? I`ll Toss ya Quick, & "TOY H" Like "JJ`s Acronym" ..
Get it Clear!, Niggas Freeze Up When They Battle Rell, Spit in Fear, Cus i Rip Them Queers ..
Scriptured Gears, Writtens Couldn't Ride, & Like "Johnson Battlin Fruit" i`ll Make "Magic Diss-a-Pear" ..




Its S.A.W. bettah Fear-the-beasts, its funny we scarin-these niggas like they nightmares-unleashed,
Add 10 more to ur crew... we still gon tear-and-feast, cuz RIP just can't recover like "failure in therapies..."
But U have to admit, im quick graspin the clip..handling, and smashin RIP's rankings-into-the-pavement,
Cuz they got a coward, a ho, a fake, n one who's mom watches him get spankings-for-entertainment..**
DTK, Magic told me his "wand" you caressed wit ease...
u got a 3 piece suit n iron pressed-sleeves...
But right after Rell spit a verse "Dress disappeared" like a "chicks doin a strip-tease"
N duc3 is just most disgraced.. I was like a confused gardener the way I had this "ho misplaced"
Concentrate...
"Poker face" but just got niggas to poke-ur-face, cuz u had our match set but suddenly had the post erased!!
And for haz...
Fat ass dude you break ya sweats tryna break a sweat, ill have you merked-now..
Cuz truth is only time Hazard really "carry weight" is in arabic/aerobic work-outs!


Faggots... get em ekoms!


So many cocksuckers in one crew...yea i said it first.. painful enough to cause my head to burst,
"Rip Into Prey" only reason they can do that is cuz they're 'online predators'
Duce with a 3? i guess it looked like an E thru-this-guy's-vision,
And dress2kill sounds more like hazard on a suicide-mission
oops dissed hazard..now this fag-is-ticked cuz i dissed-a-queer,
Mark not so magical, cuz his only magic-trick is to disappear,
haz died to the Reaper now ya crew is really R.I.P.,
only reason they BARS r lackin is cuz they card-I-D
i'll choke u bitches in the after~life cuz Smoke's more vicious-than-a-monster, MagicMark..ur invisible...ur not even listed-on-the-roster!



Uno mas! Putos!!
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

whoa this was fuckin fire. all of u guys came hard on this shit.


BEST BARS FROM EKOMS
Duce with a 3? i guess it looked like an E thru-this-guy's-vision,
And dress2kill sounds more like hazard on a suicide-mission
oops dissed hazard..now this fag-is-ticked cuz i dissed-a-queer,
Mark not so magical, cuz his only magic-trick is to disappear,



BEST BARS FROM ARVINCIBLE

Its S.A.W. bettah Fear-the-beasts, its funny we scarin-these niggas like they nightmares-unleashed,
Add 10 more to ur crew... we still gon tear-and-feast, cuz RIP just can't recover like "failure in therapies..."

and
Fat ass dude you break ya sweats tryna break a sweat, ill have you merked-now..
Cuz truth is only time Hazard really "carry weight" is in arabic/aerobic work-outs!


BEST BARS FROM FIRST PERSON
S.A.W Up, Cops Tryna Get Mah Boys For Malice, R.I.P is Tha Type Of Dudes That Got More Noise Than Talent,
Ya Flows is Shattered, Two Leaders Battled, Only Time They "Voting Hazard" is "Tryna Destroy Tha Ballots" ..
But Wait! U Niggas Say Who`s Tha Best? S.A.W, Type to Have U Choose ya Death ..
When They Shots Were Fired This Loser Left, Now it`s Like "Shit Stains On Brides" Who "Duc3 in Dress" ..
Who U Dudes impress? Not S.A.W!, Cus We Spit Flames To Chumps, Get Tamed & Slumped ..
Wanna Be Better? Bitch Change ya Wants, Cus i`ll Leave "Magic Rocked" Like "Criss Angel Stunts" ..

and the best fucking part was this

Get it Clear!, Niggas Freeze Up When They Battle Rell, Spit in Fear, Cus i Rip Them Queers ..
Scriptured Gears, Writtens Couldn't Ride, & Like "Johnson Battlin Fruit" i`ll Make "Magic Diss-a-Pear"





All got skills, but first person fucking pulled out pressure. Yall all killed this shit. Talk about getting destroyed.
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Post by Arvincible »

Lol duke that was rell...I had to go back and fix that...thought it would be obvious already...

Thanks for the feed i.e.r. Good looks mann
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Good Looks I.Eat.Rappers, I Was Tha First Person FYI Tho Lol ..
Uppin More Feed ..
Props to Mah Fam Arv, U Came Nice Fam ..
I Told U That Endin Bar Was Funny as Shit ..
Ekoms Even Though U Cyphered That, it Was Still Better Than Most ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

damn yall all came real nice man. Rell you got some skills, all of u had some type of shit, where yo lines meant two things and i felt that. how long yall been rapping? Rell i like yo last line u did


Scriptured Gears, Writtens Couldn't Ride, & Like "Johnson Battlin Fruit" i`ll Make "Magic Diss-a-Pear"
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I Been Writin all Mah Life ..
This Finna Be Mah 2nd Year Textin On an Actually Forum ..
I Use to Juss Cypher in Chatrooms ..
Battle People in Chatrooms, Shit Like That ..
But I've Always Wrote ..

Good Looks On Tha Props Tho Fam

What About You Tho Fam?
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

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this is piff my nigga i can learn from niggaz like yall
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

since i was 13 i been writing rap but it goes about 5 years before that when i did anything lyrical to begin with, forum-wise this is my uhh.. 3rd year i believe ...somethin like that, im used to live text battles so yea i hate spending too much time on writing one thing , n e ways good lookin on the feed, if im ever in it again i'll take my time to make it nicer for the viewers
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Post by Arvincible »

Yeah well, I just started textin this year...lol joined the site a few nights b4 new years...been cypherin a lot with plex, rell, and other niggas and just elevated from there...


I guess im just quick to pick it up....



Btw Good looks j-majikk


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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Yeah i Been Schoolin Mah Boy Arv ..
He Got So Much Sicker Since He Joined S.A.W ..
Thas What it is Fam, Good Shit ..

Good Looks J ..
Stay Up Fam ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

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Post by MagicMark »

I'll leave feed in a min.... tho i assume Arv has a good reason for posting in here and not the battle?...
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

i been spitting 1 year. but i got my skills just from freestyling off the top. But i hope i get better off this site though because only thing im good at is multies.
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Post by DressToKill »

Nothing special imo..some simplistic wordplay and some good wordplay with some multies thrown in..of course you can expect a response and a better one at that haha
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Post by Haz »

But Wait! U Niggas Say Who`s Tha Best? S.A.W, Type to Have U Choose ya Death ..
When They Shots Were Fired This Loser Left, Now it`s Like "Shit Stains On Brides" Who "Duc3 in Dress" ..
Who U Dudes impress? Not S.A.W!, Cus We Spit Flames To Chumps, Get Tamed & Slumped

Nice Flow..
You Sorta USed Out Ya Dress Play...But The Flow Was Nice..

i've Seen Alot Better From U Though..


Arv LoL your Shit was jus Simple And No Truth Was Behind it
LOL Callin Me Fat For a Play?

Ekoms you was Straight.. you Remind Me of a Rappin Eddie Murphy
jus a FUnny Motherfucker LoL i Was laughin At a few Lines cus Humor wus used

You Didn't Really Bring Any Hard Plays To The Plate...
But You had ya Lil Generic Personals...That Helped..


Yall Keep Droppin...
a Replie'll be Up in No Time ...
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Post by Arvincible »

Lol if u wanna see a bunch of false bars u shud see my battle with mark...im guessing hazard gave u those wack "personals"... anyways, I did this verse a week ago, I haven't been home mark. Ill drop tonight idc about votes, it won't matter when I drop..
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