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MagicMark vs Prophet (Magic KO)
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[align=center]Rip this wack kid, quick n rapid, give this prick a casket, cuz there's no way ur sicka bastard//
I'm topping 'em, n like fear of being injured while frolicking, he was afraid of a scip n hazard!//
(skipping hazard, no showed in his battle with both of 'em)
Plus what I spit is classic, he'll neve measure up to me, this herb is just to short//
Are ya bars weak? yes! make Mar see(Marcy) death, like murders in New York!//
Not 'fly', but punches'll make dude 'soar', u ian't shit, its time to bust this fag//
This guy is done, ur dying sun, not crticizing guns, but from what I saw, tek crushes mag!//
(os tto Tekneek)
test this,n like the dude he's obsessed wit make ya life wane, and ya body stuffed in a bag//
Get slayed next, N not even while practicing safe sex, would dudes be fucking with mag!//
(magnum)
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I'm topping 'em, n like fear of being injured while frolicking, he was afraid of a scip n hazard!//
(skipping hazard, no showed in his battle with both of 'em)
Plus what I spit is classic, he'll neve measure up to me, this herb is just to short//
Are ya bars weak? yes! make Mar see(Marcy) death, like murders in New York!//
Not 'fly', but punches'll make dude 'soar', u ian't shit, its time to bust this fag//
This guy is done, ur dying sun, not crticizing guns, but from what I saw, tek crushes mag!//
(os tto Tekneek)
test this,n like the dude he's obsessed wit make ya life wane, and ya body stuffed in a bag//
Get slayed next, N not even while practicing safe sex, would dudes be fucking with mag!//
(magnum)
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I'm only going to break down Prophets verse so I can show him where i found weakness in what was a pretty solid verse.
Rip this wack kid, quick n rapid, give this prick a casket, cuz there's no way ur sicka bastard//
I'm topping 'em, n like fear of being injured while frolicking, he was afraid of a scip n hazard!//
(skipping hazard, no showed in his battle with both of 'em)
Nice play on words and a good personal.
Plus what I spit is classic, he'll neve measure up to me, this herb is just to short//
Are ya bars weak? yes! make Mar see(Marcy) death, like murders in New York!//
Nice play, but no personal and dude got you with personals everytime.
Not 'fly', but punches'll make dude 'soar', u ian't shit, its time to bust this fag//
This guy is done, ur dying sun, not criticizing guns, but from what I saw, tek crushes mag!//
(os tto Tekneek)
That concept was a bit stretched. I think, if it was worded with a more common analogy, you would have had it.
test this,n like the dude he's obsessed wit make ya life wane, and ya body stuffed in a bag//
Get slayed next, N not even while practicing safe sex, would dudes be fucking with mag!//
(magnum)
You used the mag idea again and didn't finish it strong, so it didn't feel so original.
Punches:magic
Personals:magic
Nameplay:magic
Multis/flow:prophet
Entertainment:magic
Overall:magic
Rip this wack kid, quick n rapid, give this prick a casket, cuz there's no way ur sicka bastard//
I'm topping 'em, n like fear of being injured while frolicking, he was afraid of a scip n hazard!//
(skipping hazard, no showed in his battle with both of 'em)
Nice play on words and a good personal.
Plus what I spit is classic, he'll neve measure up to me, this herb is just to short//
Are ya bars weak? yes! make Mar see(Marcy) death, like murders in New York!//
Nice play, but no personal and dude got you with personals everytime.
Not 'fly', but punches'll make dude 'soar', u ian't shit, its time to bust this fag//
This guy is done, ur dying sun, not criticizing guns, but from what I saw, tek crushes mag!//
(os tto Tekneek)
That concept was a bit stretched. I think, if it was worded with a more common analogy, you would have had it.
test this,n like the dude he's obsessed wit make ya life wane, and ya body stuffed in a bag//
Get slayed next, N not even while practicing safe sex, would dudes be fucking with mag!//
(magnum)
You used the mag idea again and didn't finish it strong, so it didn't feel so original.
Punches:magic
Personals:magic
Nameplay:magic
Multis/flow:prophet
Entertainment:magic
Overall:magic
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Imma vote cuz nobody else in the site seems to be doin it.
Punches: magicmark
Personals: magicmark
Nameplay: prophet
Multi/flow: prophet
Entertainment: magicmark
Prophet...u have punches and wordplay skills but ur lack of delivery keeps u from being such a deadly battler... it seems every battle u step into u put just enough effort to lose by a little.... u shud be rippin dudes...idk.u give good battles though I guess, but that shudnt be enough for u..
Mark took this
Punches: magicmark
Personals: magicmark
Nameplay: prophet
Multi/flow: prophet
Entertainment: magicmark
Prophet...u have punches and wordplay skills but ur lack of delivery keeps u from being such a deadly battler... it seems every battle u step into u put just enough effort to lose by a little.... u shud be rippin dudes...idk.u give good battles though I guess, but that shudnt be enough for u..
Mark took this
Cool
3-0 KO magic..
Props to Prophet, for a solid verse
one problem would be crafting a punchline out of a concept which doesnt hit hard, ie Mar - see death - its an alright line, but the way it is worded, it more a bit of wordplay than a shot at me.
Also repeating the same Mag concept like comp. said is usually bad, even if the plays are different, still makes people see a lack of creativity.
your first bar was a perfect example of a great bar (allow similar have been used before), tho this was changed up nicely.. it had a personal, good punch, nice wordplay and multis and flow where solid too, 3 or 4 of those and i'd have been in trouble..
Teq crushes mag was a great concept, but different wording could have took it to a higher level, yano?
good battle man
3-0
3-0 KO magic..
Props to Prophet, for a solid verse
one problem would be crafting a punchline out of a concept which doesnt hit hard, ie Mar - see death - its an alright line, but the way it is worded, it more a bit of wordplay than a shot at me.
Also repeating the same Mag concept like comp. said is usually bad, even if the plays are different, still makes people see a lack of creativity.
your first bar was a perfect example of a great bar (allow similar have been used before), tho this was changed up nicely.. it had a personal, good punch, nice wordplay and multis and flow where solid too, 3 or 4 of those and i'd have been in trouble..
Teq crushes mag was a great concept, but different wording could have took it to a higher level, yano?
good battle man
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