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Rell Your Done-Prick Arv a Dumb-Chick
It Aint Shit To Spit And Son-Sciiiiip!
He "Passt" i'll Still Rip-Him-Later Scips-a-Hater
Scip-u-Pest! Give My TIP-A-REST
'GET OFF my Beast' Lyk i FLIIIIPD-A-GATOR!!...
Rell How you Da Best-Taday?!?
Ya Net Gunz iz Happy Cause ya Tex-Is-Gay..
R.I.P. Known 2 "Chain..Saw" Lyk a Texis-play!..
Rell Culd B 'i' Or 'K' He Still Ain Nex-Ta-J!!
You Ain Recruitin Wen u 'Git-In-Ya-Group' (Bang Bros)
Dickin-Dem-Loose,Like Shellz 'Hittin-ya-Troopz'(FAGGOT!)
Im Spittin-Da-Truuuuth..
Rell 'BITCHES OVA VOTES' Lyk Malez ain HITTIN-DA-BOOTH ( HILARY!)
These S.A.W. Pussyz Aint Eva SQUEEZIN-DEY-CANZ..
Doods 'Determine Bodys' Givin Fetuses D N-A..STRANS!!!..
When Thum-Clipz-Findin..This Dumb-Bitch-Winin
It'll Show The Only Acid He Spits By His STUMICK-LININ!..
ya Group-is-Sicker? ya Troops-Just-Bicker..
Dey'll Have To Pour a 40 And Recoop-Sum-Liquor..
Wen 'Hazard-Diss-Millz' Lyk Energy Sources Ona POLLUTED-RIVER!!!
My Name Yall Shoutin-Lamez..Steady Doubtin-Claimz Bout Hazard
But 'HIM..A...LAY..YA' Like a MOUNTAIN-NAME!!!
Fuck Karate Dawg i'll 'Box-AR'
He Can't Get Ona Track Lyk He Races 'BOX-CARS'..
I Got Ya Girls Jaw-Twitchin Pa-Listin..
She Go 'SO..LOW' Lyk a One Person AUDITION!!!
Diss-Fake-Spittin?? He Mistakes Writtins..
As Real-a-Vents..This Pussy Soldier Gives a SEAL-A-SCENT..
Of Pussy.. i'll Cut His FAMILY-TREE..
Bury His Fam Unda a Tree Dey Aint STANDIN-WITH-ME...(Fuck Niggaz)
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Post by HKX »

mad punchlines in dis shit sounds like u got beef wit a few niggaz on illest u need 2 stop droppin scrips nigga and drop dis in da Chamber dawg c'mon man dis shit was nice tho but drop audio my nigga 1
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Good Looks

And You Right.

i Need Yall To Link Me To Cool Edit Though
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Lol what are u doing here? Didn't u say fuck illest? What are u doing bitch? U suck ur wack I don't give a fuck what others say, hkx is only bein nice cuz he wants to smash on u in audio, ur garbage, u suck kid, what the fuck is this?

GET OFF my Beast' Lyk i FLIIIIPD-A-GATOR!!...

Wtf? How did that make sense?

Wow dude, u really needa get off saws dick, and I already used that chainsaw punch, ur out of it dude ur shit, hkx is ur only friend faggot, ur punches are all recycled and garbage like the green and blue trashcan. u ass licking dog food eating bitch!

Gtfo ur rhymes are basic and ur multis don't even make sense haha u were gone for two weeks and all u can come back with is this sewage water flow... ur nothing. Go to audio cuz text isn't for u faggot!! Oh yeah... get my dick outta ur mouth tooo bitch!!
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Post by HKX »

actually only reason y i'm leavin Haz feed is cuz he left me feed on sum shit and yea no doubt we suppose been done droppin audios against each other but me and Haz ain't homies at all and like i told Haz if i wasn't feelin his shit i would let him kno straight up. Arv I havent read one thing 4rm u dat is garbage honestly i think u da illest one on SAW no disrespect 2 da other niggaz on SAW minus MILLZ but shit is jus da way it is my nigga if u need feed holla at me bout it when Haz is ready 2 battle i'll be waitin matter of fact yo Haz if u need Cool Edit u could either look it up online or ask Kurse where 2 find it out both of ya'll niggaz should actually battle it out when u niggaz get da chance u kno Haz got beef wit Kurse they still leave each other positive feed on all i think a HAZARD VS SAW battle might be comin soon
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

.. i Could Careless Bout What a Nigga Feel about Me ..
Only Bitch Or Nigga That Want it ..
Set it Up ..
Haz This is Tha Worst Diss I've Ever Read From You Dawg ..
Like i`m Not Finna Argue Back & Forth With You Nigga ..
You Think You Better ..
Prove it ..
I Got Links to Prove it, Most Of Mah Wins is From You Son ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

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Post by Cee4 »

Rell Culd B 'i' Or 'K' He Still Ain Nex-Ta-J!!
^^^^
loved this line.

the rest was solid. obviously people aint gonna feel a diss against them but it wasnt wack. not your best but still pretty good
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Post by Haz »

Thanks Cee I Appreciate It...

Yall Some Butthurt Faggots..


Listen Arv You Aint From The Hood So U Don't Know Wud

"Get Off" Means... Get Off Means To Flip.. To Sell... To Pitch...

Bitch.. .


Plus This Wasnt For Yall To Leave Hate Feed It's For Otha Niggahs Feed

Of Course Yall Gunna Be Sour Fuck Out My Thread i Aint Pollutin Your Wack
Ass Threads..

Im Dead Up Get The Fuck Out My Thread With Ya Bullshit


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Post by Kurse »

Pretty clean drop.

The "Rell Culd B 'i' Or 'K' He Still Ain Nex-Ta-J!!"
and...
"But 'HIM..A...LAY..YA' Like a MOUNTAIN-NAME!!!" lines we're ur hottest bars.

The "It'll Show The Only Acid He Spits By His STUMICK-LININ!.." wasn't really over played, but seem'd a little forced.

But other than that it was filled wit decent punches, not anything too killer though.

But for a quick text, it definately made a mark, but I'm sure you can count on Rell responding with a drop of his own.
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Post by Haz »

I Know ... It's Bait.. lol

Thanks For The Feed..


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Post by Brah-Vo »

tbh thought it was dope.
Cant understand 1 or 2 of ya punches but thats iight. other parts were fire though.
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Post by MagicMark »

lol, this was cool, if not a little rushed..

had some nice original and decent hitting plays, and some plays with potential, which could have been better, with more creative wording

tho overall, it did what it was meant to do for a diss drop, gave people a laugh at the other's expense, next to jay line was clever

like some have said, id say try something like this out on audio and when you doing a diss, maybe craft it a little better so it lands harder

but this was straight, good job..
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