My Way

[Brah-Vo]

Fuck

u know i go hard on a beat
they say my text game is weak
but its hard to retreat
dudes cant catch my flow
What cant kill me only make me stronger
in battles i get burned
but in lyrics i crash and glow
Some say i got this rap game on lock
but little do they know i can flow slow or quickly
Rappin bullet points about niggaz tryna stick me
hit me up coz in my hood its always rainin glocks
on the corners where niggaz always be tradin rocks
or black slaves in stocks
Or like Steve coz he always tried to brave the crocs

wait hold on back on topic
im like a freight train nobody can stop it
My flow weird? Okay
i take it to heart but i neva show fear i dont go there i go here
so go hear some of the dopest shit out
Fuck ya votin rules
im asian so i eat them cats up
And if that dont work i proceed to beat them cats up
Or maybe in a battle i just mite sweep them cats up
Aint happened yet though i still got a long way to go
so dont tell me my ways the wrong way to flow

Imma do my shit .

[Brah-Vo]

so uh. Dont just read the coloured parts.

[Kurse]

I'm colorblind you asshole.

anyways...

Not bad. A few parts were really forced like the "on the corners where niggaz always be tradin rocks" line and "Or like Steve coz he always tried to brave the crocs" line.

I don't know niggaz to 'trade rocks' so to speak haha...would've been better if you said they were slangin rocks or pushin rocks...sumthin to that affect.

and I don't see how a Steve Irwin reference really fits in wit the block. lol

I dunno, unless you meant sumthin else and I didn't understand it...but that's what I got out of it and by what I was reading...you slightly fell off of topic there.

As for the structure and flow of it all, it was fine. You don't seem to struggle there. And I also like the honesty with yourself in the concept. Like where you pass hint that "you haven't had any wins but your time just might not have come yet" ...some people find it hard to come to terms with a record like that, but you say you're just doin you and stay confident. That's coo...I can respect that.

Not a bad drop...keep it up bruh!

[Haz]

This Was Koo Youngin..
You Gunna Understand Half Of These Textie Ass Niggahs Won't Understand
Ya Flow , And They'll Say It Don't Make Sense.. U Know Why?

CAUSE THEY TEXTIES! LMAO..
Anyways i Thought Ya Inners Was Coo & Shit.. you Sorta Did Some Freeway
Shit.. With How you Putta Multi.. Then 2 Lines Rhyme With Each Otha..

Den Next Line You Have a Multi To Match The Multi To Lines Above..
It's a Straight Style.. i Ain Fuckin Witht The Steve Irwin Shit LoL
Aint Really Comprehend it... & Yeah Fuck Tradin Rocks.. Niggahs Ain Like

"Your Roc is Bigger Then Mines Lemme Trade it"

We Get it Off Or Slang it.. Even Pitch it...

But yo Fuck All Da Drug/Gunz Shit

Niggah Be Yaself You Come Off iller...


Thanks For The Feed On My Shit Anyways

B E Z

[- Mutual -]

was alright the flow was a bit wacky but it's all good
the lyrics wernt bad keep'em comin

[MagicMark]

okay, this was alright..

rhymes where a little simple in places, multis where very simple in places, like "no way, yo gay, hoe slay" etc.. thats kinda what it feels like, you need up it so it could be like... "lost in the wind, cost to descend, boss n' ya friend, tossed in the bin, coughin n' shit" etc, even they are pretty simple, but you see the next step up?...

flow was okay, but id suggest changing your line layout, so its more conventional and easier to read, also, topic wise you seemed to be all over the place lol, which may have been intentionally but still a little off

keep droppin and you will improve tho..

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

This Was Pretty Koo, Flow Was Kinda Sloppy at Points ..
But I Felt it Tho ..
Combine Some Sick Concepts For Punches ..
I Think You Can Be Deadly ..
Ya Style is Very Different ..
So Use That as an Advantage Fam ...

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

This Was Pretty Koo, Flow Was Kinda Sloppy at Points ..
But I Felt it Tho ..
Combine Some Sick Concepts For Punches ..
I Think You Can Be Deadly ..
Ya Style is Very Different ..
So Use That as an Advantage Fam ...