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Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:16 am

The streets resemble a red carpet of blood, get loose the cameras
A market of Thugs, playin they self like Jeru the Damaja
We dont shoot flames for health, We maintain for self
Marksmen shoot in the darkness, get banged in stealth
Your heartless, target of the crack market, sellin cocaine for wealth
No bargains, prices rising, mad enterprisin
Stabbed him, left him and his mans left to die in
The cold streets, thriving, peaces never arrives in
Cases of Heineken, drunk away the pain inflicted
At an early age, learned that the game is wicked
But is pays, so he stays on the same corner and kicks it
Everyday, Part of the problem is I hang with a squadron and blaze
In my brains embedded evil, The ghetto is fuedal never equal
Thats why my motherfuckin desert eagle severs people
We all villains, never heros, Fighting a trife life
rollin dice for them zeros

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:35 pm

Another Dope fuckin piece dude...u never fail to impress me. That's the kind of writing many of these textcees, including myself, shud be using as an example of true writing and coordinating a concept that is all interesting and has a flow and includes other strong elements to make a piece worth taking the time to read...

Almost flawless gutta

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:05 am

yeah like arv said it was dope had a nice story or more like a nice concept it flowed pretty well and had elements of other things in there to entise the the reader u got sum tight scripts hope ya keep'em comin

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:58 am

This Shit Was Nice Kid, i Pictured Tha Life U Were Writin about ..
It Was indepth ..
Tha Thing That Had Me Tha Most Was Tha Multies & Flow Was So Much On Point ..
Lyrically it Was Nice ..
Never Fell Off ..
Ya Best Piece ive Read Fam ..

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:45 am

I Like The Way You Elaborated To Paint The Perfect Portrait, The Emotion Lies In Depth With This Drop...8.5/9... Stay Up Dude..

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:29 pm

ahhhh my gosh.
Dope shit.
Flowed so well and u managed to keep the sotry goin perfectly.
Aint no need to repeat what the dudes above me said.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:51 am

good shit. i disagree with the majority coz i seen you write a lot better than this bu it was still good. nice imagery. u definitly a unique writer. i mean i would of known that was a Gutta verse

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:34 am

this needs more feed

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