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Twilight Zone pt1

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Inspired by a dream i had



Came home one night.
Two doses of ecstacy
outta my brain like my psy-chosis was next to me
Shit

I laid on my bed, felt like a cloud
started sleep talkin the thoughts were drained out my head
I feel asleep, quickly, i was strictly sickly, my heart raced, beats increased paced, like BPM

and then BLACK i couldnt see anythen.



The Twilight Zone






I walked across the sky with the stars in my eyes
but my scars made me blind 44 pence was the cost i could die for.
Starstruck model like when kate moss was high
along the side i was tossed to die my boss was right
If you fuck up now then you fuck up ya life

Switch the scene to a black limousine
Along the other seats were some crack fiends leanin
the ice cream queen screamin coz a pack of dogs eatin off her legs
them fresh waffle cones then its off with her head
set me off to the bed
oh wait i mean off to the bread
exactly 2 slices of it
which send me to the sand witch
where a million dollars is the cost u can wed
where hassle hoff likes to rest


I Wake up, but im not really awake
A dude wearin pink says to me



Look at this right here
Look at what these dudes might fear
Look at what the worlds been keepin a secret over the years right here
Or what the others mug and struggle over hours on beats right here
Or what people do to survive when faced with genocide when chased by soldiers who took him alive
Who woulda thought the survivors would live to see the sea be free like a commandment that told thee to flee



Then im incarcerated
im read my rights
i want the attention but all of a sudden i dread the lights


so this is the anthem that the maidens say
how many peeps are you swayin today
or your freedom that was taken away
or the 2 words your forsaken to say
or the night u slept through when you awaken to day
when it isn't a slow walk but your still pacin away
or when you run coz your afraid of facin the pain
or when you stand outside so you could taste the rain

Nigga

who took you in when u struggled to find a place to stay
a lawsuit every hour whats the case today?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Cookie to anyone who can name ALL the references.
Most of them aren't that obvious and you really have to think.

I'll like, give u all my illest cash. or some shit.
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Post by - Mutual - »

it flowed well
nice story crazy shit goin on
but i geuss thats why its the twilight zone
man but namin all the references i couldnt name one
nva mind all of em
well good luck with that man
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Post by Stratosphere »

You on some other type shit .... I'm gonna go check if you have an audio drop because I cant get a hold of your style in this context .grade:C
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Yeh its abit hard i understand. Its really hard to transcend audio lyrics into something you can read easily. You have to listen to it.

Yeh im abit different but i dont feel the need to defend my style. Take it or leave it. Im really not a textcee.

Good Lookz on the feed .

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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Was a Pretty Nice Piece ..
Imo, I Liked Tha Flow Of it ..
You Coulda Got More in depth With ya Creavitiy Tho ..
Like Open ya Mind to a More Complex Wordplay Game or Punches Even ..
Ya Know, But all and all it Was a Koo Drop ..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Good lookin on the feed rell.
Thanks.
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Post by Arvincible »

Hmmm rs this is unique...I quote rell and I caught the flow, buttttt the rhymes go in different directions, the concept is really iffy, like I know the fact that its a dream can give it more leeway, idk ur multis have improved, its not great yet but still its better... I didn't like the fact that ur dreamin of dudes in pink tellin u to look at a specific spot tellin you that watever he was making u look at was something that men feared...that's too homo for me man... other than that, the imagery was good..it made it seem like a dream with all the flying and stars and shit.

Good job keep it up flip boy
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