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Post by HKX »

Dis is one of them story tellin tracks, u gotta listen 2 each of da verses clearly 2 understand da whole track or you'll be lost and confused. Hope u niggaz feel da track so far my peps r feelin it if ya'll need sum feed on sum shit holla at me everyone stay up hope u feel dis joint.



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Post by Kurse »

My nigga...u been keepin this one under the wraps from me! haha That's whats happenin though...these kinda tracks poppin up outta nowhere are like pleasant suprises for me! Sick sick sick sick sick concept...I like this shit. It takes me way back and reminds me of real rap...rap that used to tell a story and mean sumthin. Something like Pac's "Brenda's Got A Baby"...it was sumthin that expressed the story of another's pain and takes us into another individuals eyes! Great storyline on this one manito...shits dope!

That's A.M.E. hoez...remember that! haha
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Post by Viral »

shits raw, da whole story intertwining is bananas as fuck man!..haha...i remember hearin it before u recorded it..u did a good job on da mixin too...definatley a track i could listen to over n over again, u gotta come thru so we can get down on some shit..lol we got some tracks we havent finished mayyyne!...lol


i gotta start givin feedback on peoples shit..lol i been slackin mad yo!...well i been busy wit mah music also..so i baerly ever come on here anymore...must change that shit..haha
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Post by Dead Silence »

i liked this track alot.
feelin it alot.

best song from you so far
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Post by Haz »

FIIIIIIIIIIIRE!!!

Lmfao The Verses Went Along Perfectly...
The Storytelling Ability Is There The Beat is Cool
you just gotta make Me Feel it More., Aint Nothin Missin
Jus Keep Doin different Storylines And i'll Tell U When u Get me Like Dat

Dats One Thing i Like Bout pac And Eminem
They Give me This Certain Feeling When i Listen to Storylines

And Joe Budden.

The Flows On Point The VErses Were ill , The Storylines Were Sick B..

The Beat Was Nice

This Shit was Raw..

Stay Up ..
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Post by B-Bear »

I really liked this one... emotion, delivery, flow, lyrics - flawless

There's only one thing that I would've changed, and that's parts of the beat... especially the hooks (not talkin about your lyrics), i would've imagined like a slow piano hook, like the beat slowin down a bit.. almost like ur givin up.. u feel me? don't get me wrong, it's good - but when I sorta visualized the beat, I waited for that calm part - where your anger didn't come through.. that's the only thing I thought missed from makin this a great track.. but donno if u can do a lot about that, unless u buy it..

keep doin your thing!
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Post by B-Bear »

I can send you a beat similar to what i was talkin about if u wanna hear it
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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da props everybody yea i wanted 2 do sumthin different wit dis track i liked da way it turned out thanks 4 da feed ya'll shit is appreciated yo bear send me dat beat fam at [email protected] lol and if u ain't usin it and if im feelin it would u mind a nigga rippin da beat and all lol
uppin 4 more feed if ya'll niggaz could leave sum ill leave sum back 4 ya'll and ill leave sum 4 da peeps who left me sum when i get da chance ill do it asap
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Post by drunken jesus »

probably the best jawn i've heard from you, lyrics, delivery, beat everything was meshing well

you seem to be improving lyrically pretty well, your flow is solid but it seems a lil choppy at times but overall this was well done
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by HKX »

good lookin dj man u need 2 make me a beat dawg yo shit is raw as fuck i heard da shit u made 4 kurse dope nigga holla at me my email is [email protected] so holla u hear my type of beats i like 2 murk u dope wit dat shit 4 real much props and much props 2 everyone leavin a nigga feed 4 real hip hop till da die i die i luv dis shit illest is da illest aint nobdody fuckin wit us feel me ill leave feed 4 peps who left feed 4 me good lookin shit is appreciated leave more feed if u want hahahahahaha 1.
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

YEAH HOMIE...SHIT IS REAL DOPE


I LOVE IT =]

MAD SHIT MAN..IDK WHAT 2 SAY..JUST SO SMOOTH..FLOWD SO WELL

KEEP EM COMIN

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Post by drunken jesus »

you got aim or msn homie? i ain't got a clue how to send shit thru email
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Kurse »

drunken jesus wrote:you got aim or msn homie? i ain't got a clue how to send shit thru email


His AIM is: hardkorex1

he's not on alot, but you'll see his shit go up when he logs on.
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Post by HKX »

my bad homie a nigga ain't at da crib right now won't be there till 7:30 matter a fact let me update dat info on my shit right now since i jus got dat lol
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

i love it
its awesome
"dont ever were these colors cus they'll never leave you lonely"
thats probably not exactly how it goes but its my fav
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