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jus to get betta (keystyle)

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so this is a catastrophe
it has to be the worst yet still considered a masterpiece
it has to be stopped it's madness see
a-dependency-to-drugs will-be-the-end-of-these-thugs
we can hear every thought in my head mentally-bugged
we were sent-to-be-crushed like insects ment-to-be-flushed awaw
se i was slowly gently-i'm-hushed
told-to-be-quiet i remain bold-yet-defiant
defyin any laws alone cold-yet-relyin
on others to fuck up not to be sold-come-flyin
neva sell ya soul-to-the-devil
i'll roll-up-some-metal up his ass it out hotter than mold-in-a-kettle
we aint old-yet-we-settle
down-to-my-life
i got my crown-in-my-strife
i'm no king but no clown-in-my-eyes
i think i've earnt sum respect i aint drowned-in-despise
so many haters who go round-n-divise
a plan to ridicule-us ya pitiful-cus
i'm here to elevate-nicely
not generate-fights-see or relegate-by-me
bring us all together i wanna celerbrate-rhymes-see
cus it's a outpus fo anger an input fo a miracle
people say it's spiritual but it's cynical
not sinnicle but turns to be clinical
a berievement you have to berieve
dont be decieved but not fo too long u shant grieve
move on....

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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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fucking hell
no fucking feed again
uppin pls
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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you're getting a better grip of metaphores, but them multis are forced as hell
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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