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quick freestyle

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I'll smoke me a Philly, like I popped Cyssero
You know me and really, I be hot gettin' dough
Show yaself, you can find me on the block sittin' low
Wit my glock hittin' dro, I'm on top, sittin' though

Mainstream rappers get they styles ripped up
I came clean in the game, my main style's chipped up
The same name, same chain, nine milli's flipped up
Fire shots, show the blocks, I'm.. really sick huh!!

My raps stay fly like a seven four seven
You can buy the ice that's on my bezel for eleven
Kevlar helmet, might level-four my melon
I got trust for my girl but, never for a felon

Like Volcanos I'm filled with hot shit that's flowin'
All they knows is skills is what I'm holdin' and showin'
All day hoes be lickin' on me slowly and goin'
Down to the bottom, when I'm comin' they goin'





i was gonna record this shit but nahh
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Post by - Mutual - »

ya this is pretty dope nice flow flowed well keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

Alright thanks bro i was jus fukking around.
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Post by Arvincible »

Nice freestyle man, some metaphors were kinda played out and mulits were ok, all in all u still pulled it off, and I bet it'll be a great audio if u do it.. good job keep it up.
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Post by The DZA »

pretty dope drop for a quicky...like what Arvincible said, some of the metaz were a lil played out, but still good none the less

"Like Volcanos I'm filled with hot shit that's flowin'
All they knows is skills is what I'm holdin' and showin'
All day hoes be lickin' on me slowly and goin'
Down to the bottom, when I'm comin' they goin' "

^^my fav two bars...stay up...
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