okay jus a key style but well
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okay ha let me start by sayin nah fuck that
we be stealin ya necklace i'm wreckless when i test-this
we restless causin beef in the street i'm a men-ace
a failure to earth i got more than i deserve
a curse to disperse around the world it's the worst
a death dont hold ya breath i get on ya nerves
cant wait to observe wait-to-conserve any faggot hatin-on-earth
debatin creatin-there-slur i'm in no state-to-concur
testin fate-n-we-were gettin to late-to-be-served
people sayin cant be rushin-are-verse
we were crushed-n-we-learnt
theres haters in this world hangin off word-we-speak
it sounds absurd-to-me why am i in need
everybody knew it was there no body gave feed
to my scripts they ignored cus it was me
nah i doubt they did fuck it yes i agree!
shit i aint gone make it till i elevate
then rennovate back to a better place
back to my original face to face madness wit no grace
no pace dyin at any time fuck this i been displaced
feed pls
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

multis are improving slightly. their still kinda basic but considering where u were not too long ago ur improving. thhe whole piece seemed kinda forced to me. i dont know if it is me but some of it dosent make sense
shit i aint gone make it till i elevate
then rennovate back to a better place
back to my original face to face madness wit no grace
^^^^
so u want to elevate then go back... i dunno im confused
shit i aint gone make it till i elevate
then rennovate back to a better place
back to my original face to face madness wit no grace
^^^^
so u want to elevate then go back... i dunno im confused


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thanks fo da feed anyhow
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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