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dont try this at home

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

u really must be demented to come at me twice

chef in the kitchen to leave u fried-in-a-pot, guts twisted around and tied-in-a-knot
ur scared of gettin ur "period" so u hide-from-a-"dot", i'd let ur lyrics rot but u already died-on-the-spot

gruesome in battle so i'm rippin tounges out to provoke-him-to-spit,
strangle u with ur own intestines and watch u start chokin-thru-shit,

i kept this one short but i made sure i extended-violence,
by the way.. i didn't hear ur comeback cuz ur text-ends-with-silence(crickets)

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i'll smack ya bars in pairs and make u shut-up-in-two,
if n e one's kissing my ass.. it should've-been-you...
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EkomS wrote:u really must be demented to come at me twice

chef in the kitchen to leave u fried-in-a-pot, guts twisted around and tied-in-a-knot
ur scared of gettin ur "period" so u hide-from-a-"dot", i'd let ur lyrics rot but u already died-on-the-spot

gruesome in battle so i'm rippin tounges out to provoke-him-to-spit,
strangle u with ur own intestines and watch u start chokin-thru-shit,

i kept this one short but i made sure i extended-violence,
by the way.. i didn't hear ur comeback cuz ur text-ends-with-silence(crickets)

NOTE:

i'll smack ya bars in pairs and make u shut-up-in-two,
if n e one's kissing my ass.. it should've-been-you...







yea nigga im demented/
and u pushing the buttons u better prevent it/
cuz evry single one of my words i ment it/
and i will litiritly kill u , get it?/
u aint no contender/
u a pretender/
ill wait for u in ur crib so when u enter/
ill blow a big ass hole in ur center/
and have ur brains looking like i put them in a blender/
cut ur head off mail it/
and have it come back to the sender/
so i could take one more look at ur face n laugh/
while u looking like spawn with out the mask/
knock ur ass out have u seeing different colors like sirence/
yea ill end my rhymes in silence/
but best of belive is gonna end up in violence....../
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

im 'enclosing these bars' like an 'ambient-cell',
eyo... dont use words that u can't-even-spell,

spackle ya mouth white cuz that toothpaste-is-cum-u-smear,
ur just gettin laughed at.. now who's-face-is-funnier?,

if u mean wat u say then ur a fag and that's damn-for-sure,
ur style's amateur cuz u store dildos in a cannister,

i'm 'cuttin ya base' up like a 'knife-with-strikes-to-bunt',
u get rolled, burned, and smoked... no wonder ur "Life-Is-like-A-Blunt"

i'll bring it n e style u want.. just keep getting clowned kid, and i only call u kid cuz ur too ignorant to know better, and even my nieces have better comebacks
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EkomS wrote:im 'enclosing these bars' like an 'ambient-cell',
eyo... dont use words that u can't-even-spell,

spackle ya mouth white cuz that toothpaste-is-cum-u-smear,
ur just gettin laughed at.. now who's-face-is-funnier?,

if u mean wat u say then ur a fag and that's damn-for-sure,
ur style's amateur cuz u store dildos in a cannister,

i'm 'cuttin ya base' up like a 'knife-with-strikes-to-bunt',
u get rolled, burned, and smoked... no wonder ur "Life-Is-like-A-Blunt"

i'll bring it n e style u want.. just keep getting clowned kid, and i only call u kid cuz ur too ignorant to know better, and even my nieces have better comebacks




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ok man u think u gangsta cuz ur saying tuff words over the pc?/
nigga u pussy u get locked n ull go str8t to pc ( protective Custody)/
im on the block moving white making some pc/
i got a house full of white i aint tlkn bout the one in D.C/
yea i use the same words but im nice like that/
u keep talkn shit u gonna get beat right off the back/
i got ''heat'' that look like shaq/
so homeboy if u wanna get up to my level get on a ladder/
and it still wont even matter/
ull be scared shiting and pissing out ur whole bladder/
while i 1,2 step in ur grill like ciara/
u cant touch me i stayed armed/
n u can stay with a lucky charm/
but u gonna get harmed/
and aint no body geting clowned/
bitch u see me u put the smile to a frown/
and put ur head down/
u already know who holds the crown/
and u betta not make a sound/
cuz the next move u make gonna end up 6ft underground/


p.s, u got a shittty ass diss, u my bitch u sit down when u piss
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while i 1,2 step in ur grill like ciara/

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yes i find that line funny as well.. becuz it just so happened not to rhyme.. bravo demented.. u seem to enjoy proving me right... btw ciara is twice the man u r

.. oh and that pc pc pc rhyme was pathetic, the only pc's u got is ur best friend and parental control so settle down before u hurt urself kid
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol ok why u gotta tell me this spit something back, all this shit talking aint do u no good as as far as i see u aint beating me.and uhm go look up the word demented in the dictionary im shure u dont even know what it stands for.
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So much for the roll demented. I enjoyed it while it last.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

spit something back? lol u havn't even topped my first diss... y would i just keep crushing u... i spit something.. u spit something wack.. i spit something.. u spit something wack.. to get to the point.. ur just boring the shit out of me and until u spit something worth responding to im done clowning u... go impress ur mother with those pitiful rhymes
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Post by drunken jesus »

why spit at this dumb herb that trys kicking a thug verse,
i'll just leave him cut up more than a brick in the suburbs,
you must be hitting some sherm nigga testing me's lethal
you got your hood shit ass backwards like a seventies beatle
you ain't seeing me i do this shit bored and still murk you easily
you the same bitch with a spot on my carpet where your knees should be

there you go hillbilly, you ain't even get your own thread lmao you get 3 half assed bars in ekoms thread, don't even reply with more wack shit i'm not wasting anymore time on you
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

wow killa i said that in elementry skool like on some serious shit...lol @ closing my threads smh why u hating cuz im dissing u? if u dont wanna read it dont read it just ignore it stop suckin it.what a herb...
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Post by drunken jesus »

i didn't close any of your threads honkey, somebody else did

and nothing in any of your disses was even remotely close to any bar me and ekoms wrote, you suck at life
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by precise »

this is entertaining, and invincible lyracist stop egging him on, your making him look like a fool for thinking hes dope, rofl
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