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Arson who????

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This Guy Drinks Thinken It Makes Ya Tough/I'll Put 7 on your Chest Like "vicks"
Vapor Rub/ur at best a Major scrub/so therefore Ur Fucked Face First Punk/
Actin Like Your Text Is ill/Dress Killed You/So How Can Dress Get Killed?/
This Fat Fuck/Act's Tough/But Give's Guy's Backrubs In Bathtub's/
act like your Rhyme schemes tight/when i got Black kids your Hood tryen 2 be white/

So watch this Target Fall/When I whip out my Arsonal/
R Son All/Is Gettin Ripped "daily" Becuz Carson's Dull/
Respond Im Darin You/if Your so sick then I am The Thera Flu/


Im iller Bar None/ur wack ta ma I bet u work in a Factory/Maken Spark Plug's
Or Servin Cofee at a local Starbucks/While im Blowen up Like Martyr's
In a Parked Bus/

Im done dont ever diss again.....ever
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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Wtf are You Talkin Bout Don't Ever Diss again? ..
Lol ..
Don't Worry i`ll Get Back at You ..
I`ll Leave Feed Back Lata ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Bobby Star »

Sick Diss... Nice mutlies..
the flow was smooth throughout
some real funny punche's, havnt heard them b4 so they Fresh to me
imma give it 8.5/10 only b coz i would have liked to see more wordplay in it

Both y'all should battle 8 BARS - My opinion tho it'd be sick as fuck
SOMETHING WE ALL ADORE, SOMETHING WERE DYING FOR, NUTHING BUT PAIN, STUCK IN THIS GAME, SEARCHIN FOR FORTUNE AND FAME! -2PAC
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

Well this was good not as great as they make it. only like 3 stood out for me i think u came nice on him with. Dont know who wil win this beef but im hoping to see this beef keep on going.
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