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motion, like the waves of an ocean
emotion of an object portraying devotion
ill smoke and blow my lungs wide open
and not care cause we're all immortal
up the cathedral steps he walks the portal
hopin, the gates of heaven are still open
i'll broker your pons at several installments
youll vomit your tonsils along-with your cortex
you'll seem-to-loose so much bodily fluid
till ur more see-through than an infrared beam dude
its important to produce vocals with a ball pen
your impotent if you think you can be that ocean
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good emotion
started better then got worse
jus about
it was good
more like a poem i thought
but good
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Piece Was Decent Fam ..
It Was More Of a Poetical Piece imo ..
A lot More imagery and Abstract ..
Ya Know ..
As a Poem it`s Nice ..
As a Rap?
It`s Decent ..
Props Fam ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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mutual i thought i told you not to feed me any more ( along with sickest and dead)
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