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Chunk Up A DUC3...

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Fuck It Back To Battle Style...

Yall Want War...Yall Got It

Come Face The Don, I'll Lay Pipe Quick And Fuck This Bitch Fast, Like I Laid D Dog, I'll Bring The Heat With A Shock, In Case He's Gone, Cuz Duc3 Couldn't Bust Tech, Like Tryin To Shoot With The Safety On

You Know Im Hard, That Boy Scip, You Can Find Him On Strips, Grindin That Piff, Duc3 A Bitch, Watch This Dame Dash Like His Diamonds Were Stripped, Kid I Was Mindin My Bizz, But You Came At Me So Now D You Eyed Up Like Alcoholics Drivin A Whip

Like Angry Parents I'll Have You Grounded Forever, Leave You Floored Up Bitch Then You Swarmed With Fists, You Can't Endure My Hits, Have You Seized Up Like You Was Born A Crip, Cuz Your Image Is All Online, Like Porno Pics

This Pussies Fucked, Yea This Cats Doomed, You Can't Size Up To Scip, Like Regular Kicks To A Shaq Shoe, And All Your Ink Will Be Erased Like Unhappy Customers With Tattoos, Cuz Duce The Shit? Only When Referring To Going To The Bathroom

You Would Be Duckin The Fight, Wow, I'll Bust In This Guys Eyes, Then Come In This Guys Mouth, I'm Fuckin Ya Wife Now, Its Saw, I'll Leave You Dancin With Bladed Like Crumping With Knives Now, I'll Leave Duc3 Broke, Couldn't Afford Electricity, The Way I'm Punchin Ya Lights Out
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmaoooo

You're Shit Is Extended Like Delayed Bile Movements...
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Post by - Mutual - »

other than the extended shit and forced flow n multies
i liked it the punches were good in sum places
posibly way to much filler but it was a good diss
overall it was good
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Dead Silence »

It was alright.

on a diss stance
it was good

but overall as a rap

it was alright

it seem to lack something i dk what it is.

Flow was choppy through out the whole thing.

overall

7/10

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Post by Haz »

Dis Shit Was Wack Nigga
Get Ya BArs Up..
LMAO U GOT R.I.P'D Up ...
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmaooo Scip You Rap Like A Panzy!
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LMAO
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