.. Dress is Killed ..

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:07 pm

Look, Punches is Hot, You`ll Think it Was Hell Hittin, i`ll Leave This "Man Without a Face" Like "Mel Gibson" ..
U No "Comp" To Me, So Start "Dell Switchin" Cus to Mah Body Count, i`ma "Add Dress" Like "Mail Listins" ..
Rell Spittin, Quick to Rip U Lames to Shreads, Dawg Either i`ma Michael Vick U Or Better Start Playin Dead ..
U a Hoe i`ll Take ya Bread, Buzz ya Wig Like i Shaved ya Head, & Have "D Ress" Like "Wade in Bed" ..
U Suck, i`m Use to Winnin, i`ll Shoot U Grinnin, Have ya Team Runnin in Circles, Some Coochies Spinnin ..
Mah Text Shots, is Like Rugers Pennin, & ya Trash Fam, ya Complexitiy Level is about as Sim Pool as Computer Swimmin ..
DT Should add Two K`s to His Name Cus No Negros Feelin` ya, U a Homo Pretendin to Be Hetero`s Killin ya ..
i`ll Have Metro Peelin` ya, Once Tha Steel Bust, i`ll Be Quick Leave "Kill Fucked" Like "Cases Of Nercophilia" ..

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:36 pm

the flow was pretty straight
the mutlies were good
the vocab was a little off but well
shit it was pretty dope all around
the punches i think were great with the nameplay

keep'em comin

-MiiLz. · Post by **-MiiLz.** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:53 pm

Flow Was A Lil Off in Some Areas
Tha Punches Was Murder And Yo Nameplay Was Nice.
They Defiantly Connected With Ya Punches

DT Should add Two K`s to His Name Cus No Negros Feelin` ya, U a Homo Pretendin to Be Hetero`s Killin ya ..

i`ll Have Metro Peelin` ya, Once Tha Steel Bust, i`ll Be Quick Leave "Kill Fucked" Like "Cases Of Nercophilia" ..

Rell Spittin, Quick to Rip U Lames to Shreads, Dawg Either i`ma Michael Vick U Or Better Start Playin Dead ..

U a Hoe i`ll Take ya Bread, Buzz ya Wig Like i Shaved ya Head, & Have "D Ress" Like "Wade in Bed" ..

Look, Punches is Hot, You`ll Think it Was Hell Hittin, i`ll Leave This "Man Without a Face" Like "Mel Gibson" ..
U No "Comp" To Me, So Start "Dell Switchin" Cus to Mah Body Count, i`ma "Add Dress" Like "Mail Listins"

^^^^ Fav Bars U Killed Him With This.

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:20 pm

GoodLooks On Tha Feedback Fam ..
Uppin For More ..

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:25 pm

this was an alright peice.
nothing to special about it.

some lines were good some just wernt.

sickest chick in the game · Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:00 am

It was aight

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Fri Jul 25, 2008 8:56 am

what happened to our battle fam?

overall this was pretty nice..good flow to it and the rhyme scheme was there as well..keep at it rell

Chernobyl · Post by **Chernobyl** » Sun Aug 03, 2008 8:01 am

hahahaah This Was Trash,Show Me Where it actually Rhymes

Plus Can i have a refund on the last 2 Min of my Life back

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