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Haz
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He Wasnt With Da Bullshit Dem Phoneyz-Dun-Give-in..
Talking To Himself Like He Was Da Only.One.Livin
Sayin Repeatedly Fake Ass People Dont Stand.Ta.Help..
Dey Stand 2 See U Fall 2 a Point U Dunt Undastand.Ya.Self
Pops.Dead His Mother Pops.Meds His Brother Pops.Led..
So hes Stuck Taking,Traits Theres no Escaping,Fate
He said There's a Fine line Between Love And Hate..
he Hates To Love the Drugs,he,Takes..Love Is Fake..
Ready 2 O,d cause lifes Bullshit Equals...
a Needle Full-a-Diesel.. Misunderstood,Crisp..Under..wood..
he Couldnt be Heard in a Room Full-a-People..
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aaah i really didnt know what you were speaking about.But The rapped fire type
flow was pulled off somewhat i would say.


Nuthing really stood out,im not hating jus nothing caught my eye it wasnt wack
by any mean's just could have been better i thought,stay up man's
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O .
It's Fine it Was a Quick Key...

Read Da Otha Drop ..
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this piece was deffo a dope piece flowed well i loved the multies and fo a quick key this shit was especially tight
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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nice

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you mad nice
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