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Grave Diggers (RIP Diss)

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R. Son. All
Arvincible
Scip


i`ll Leave U Niggas, Dead Wit Force, Straddle Up On Each Other, Juss Wed ya Horse ..
Don't Need "J" to "Bed U Dorks", TOYH Get Dicked By Bill, & "Ripped By Miilz" Like "Celeb Divorces" ..
U ain't Fuckin Wit S.a.w, Rip Juss Makin Noise, Get around Mics, Tryna Play Wit Boys ..
Ya Moms Woulda That i Was Kobe How i Lake Her Boy, Tha "Christmas Donations" Can't Even "Save This Toy" ..
Niggas Can't Take Tha Heat, Why Bother Wit Mild, Talkin Shit Lata On, Cus i Slaughtered ya Now ..
Tryna Take Mah Flow, Mini Rell Watered U Down, R.Son.Haz, Like "Daddy Designers" i Fathered ya Style ..
Haz is a Depressed Kid, He Use illest as a Great Escape, He Feels E-Thuggin Makes Him Safe ..
But Like Combinations, Tha Net Made Him Break, Esp. Messin Wit "Halloween Chicks" That "Faked They Face" ..
Flows is Better, Shaz Read Off Papers, Only Time "Hazard Does Flow" is "Toxic Waste in Growin Weather" ..
Rell? Yall Know He Leather, a Crew Full Of Fags, Quick to See "Dress in Hazard" Like "Clothing Errors" ..
Slap ya Quick, I`ll Show You How to Rap This Sick, DTK Was On Actin Shit, So i Decided to Blast Tha Clips ..
JJ i Don't Needa Smack ya Bitch, to Crack ya Lips, Cus They Chapped as Shit, & Leave "Dress in a Box" Like "Bride Packages" ..
Punches Quick to Pick Up, and Cause yo Slams, Leavin all ya Hot Flows Dammed, U Bitches ain't Playin Me, Like a Console Jam ..
Haz is Lame, i`m Not yo Fan, TOYH Really White, Thas Not yo Tan, & DTK Couldn't "Paint a Picture" in a Reader`s Mind Usin "Picassco`s Hands"


R.etards I.n P.anties...
cuz helmet never fitted for sex while id hate to be considered a Dress, ya Bill's past due n we got unlimited text...
Toyh in the sports bar overcommited to plex... n No flow for haz its like readin written touretts..
Just faggots in a group, I walked in on haz wipin dress with the lube, im just wreckin the crew...
Haz "toyin/ toyh-and" a Dress in the hood? Lol damn..and Bill usin roids for impressin a dude..
Haz is bananaz? I guess SAW dealin with chimps, soft niggas like feelin the tits,
The realest to spit, deshell the clip on u niggas like arv was peelin a shrimp..
We told haz he sucked a long time ago, why r u still typin like u so mighty?
Arv already buried u 3 times, in-grave/engrave R.I.P. Similar to tombstone writing!!
Niggas walkin in they own death parade, Ill dent ya big grills like crashin escalades,
Meet ya maker, we're freshly made... cuz SAW made bloody RIPs like flesh to blades,
We keep writtens smart, n u pussies couldn't sound right like hearin some kittens bark
Yall mad cuz I already got yall RIPped apart..face it, all of u couldnt hang with just Scippy's part...


I Smack Herbs, Haz's Textin Is Bad But He Raps Worse, Punches Leave This Pussy Sore, So This Cats Hurt
I Stay Strapped Jerk, Send A Round Of Applause Ya Way, Like I Clapped First, And Its True, Haz Couldn't Handle Magic Like The Raptors

Its Saw, We Demise Fakes, All You Faggots Are Frosted, Ya Guys Flakes, So I'll Kill You Quick For Times Sake
Then Bust In Your Dimes Face, Cuz I'll Go Off Crazy And Rip Dress, Then Lay Down Flowers Like Angry Bridesmaids

I'll Strike The Best, Then Fight The Rest, RIP, You All Are Too Pussy, Like Dyke's And Sex
But I'm Quite Impressed, Sike, Yall Light, And I Aint Snitchin But The Way I Have D Up Full Court Its Like A Press

Enslave Most, Bring The Heat To Scorch Ya, And Blaze Homes, Cuz Your Punches Never Connect Like Gay Phones
Like Paint Jobs I'll Change Tones, Then Dig You're Grave And Lay Bones, Cuz The Only Time RIP Above Me, Is On My Gravestone

Fuck The Bullshit, I'm Demandin The Truth, Haz Tryin To Pull Tricks But His Antics Are Used, So The Chances For You
Are Slim, I'll Leave Him Pantin And Blue, Put Him Between The Bread, Sanwhiched In Two, This Faggot's Never “Getting Inâ€
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Post by Haz »

Big Mistake Yall...
R.I.P..


And Scip i See U Constantly Talkin Bout My Audios B When u Wus On My Dick..
Firs Off... Second DROP A AUDIO B.. Drop One...



Anyways...


Rell Ya Millz Line Was The Nicest Punch In Da Verse In My Opinion..
U Outshined ya Shoeshiner ( Arv) And ya Maid Scip..


Arv You Had Da Weakest Verse Out The Script B.. ya Multis Wus Ass.
You aint Bring Nothing To Da Table Seen No Hard Hitting Punches.


No Quotables On Your Part..


Scip.. You Came With Some Cool Lines

Fuck The Bullshit, I'm Demandin The Truth, Haz Tryin To Pull Tricks But His Antics Are Used, So The Chances For You
Are Slim, I'll Leave Him Pantin And Blue

^ Dat Shit Up There Had Flow.. And The Multis Was Cool..

In My Opinion The Magic Line Was Lame Bill Used Da Concept On Magic LMAO..

And Yall Played Out Da Dress ( Bride ) Line.. Other Den Dat.

Rell Rippd Dis Shit... Yall both Got Outshined..

Rell
Scip
arv..

The Order..


Good To See U Niggahs Replyin Though...
U Gunna Catch a Mean One Rofl...
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Post by Haz »

Quick to See "Dress in Hazard" Like "Clothing Errors" ..
Slap ya Quick, I`ll Show You How to Rap This Sick, DTK Was On Actin Shit, So i Decided to Blast Tha Clips ..
JJ i Don't Needa Smack ya Bitch, to Crack ya Lips, Cus They Chapped as Shit, & Leave "Dress in a Box" Like "Bride Packages" ..
Punches Quick to Pick Up, and Cause yo Slams, Leavin all ya Hot Flows Dammed, U Bitches ain't Playin Me, Like a Console Jam ..
Haz is Lame, i`m Not yo Fan, TOYH Really White, Thas Not yo Tan, & DTK Couldn't "Paint a Picture" in a Reader`s Mind Usin "Picassco`s Hands"


^^^... Rell i Forgot To say That shit Wus Solid Right There B...

Cept Da Bride Packages Lines Been Used.

Wait For My Reply Dough
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Post by Scip »

wow kid hop off his dick...and i fed on your shit cuz u asked otherwise i wouldnt have and i wasnt gunna give u some real bullshit feed so i said it was decent and if u remeber b i said i was feelin the beat...i never i sadi was feelin your shit....ya flow sucks...youre terrible in text...you won on some dickridin shit...just get over the fact that u suck lyrically...end of discussion

uppin for feed

but haz thanks for feedin on our diss against ur wack ass crew

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Post by Haz »

Wait ..

Who Smashed Who ? ...
ima Make Sure 2 Smash You Again Kid ...
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Post by DressToKill »

Scip you had nice multies and some nice plays dude..for example your opener was pretty hot..even though I am not a fan of your structure because it takes away alot from your flow which makes everything choppy..R.Son.All you definently in my opinion had the best verse..you had alot of effecient name plays more towards me but they got a little worked over in the end..but I guess its hard being original after a while with a name alone..Arv my fav bar from you was the in-grave/engrave writing play..pretty nice a good concept in itself..you had some alright bars but some not so good..no hate though

Decent diss from yall..imo nothing to eye opening R.Son.All had a few bars that I enjoyed more than the other..but this aint topping my diss ;)
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Post by Arvincible »

Thanks dress, appreciate the feed outside the beef, unlike ur monkey hazard getting erections over the verses, thanks.
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeah there was a fire flow
punches were good from everybody
flows i liked from everybody
the vocab was alright

R.Son.All your verse was the best for me but well jus my opinion

keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Dead Silence »

OH EM GE

lol

ne ways

i cant do an MC breakdown because its gonna get the same feed back.
Amazing Wordplay.Strong Punches. this was the best diss ive seen in quite some time.

one more note.
Arv.
i didnt like your style.
i mean it was clever. but i wasnt feeling it. but it still got the job done.

10/10
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Good Looks DS ..appreciate ya Feed Man ..

Everybody Else GoodLooks ..
A lot Of Cocky Niggas ..
Saw Set Em Straight ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Haz »

LOL^.

ooo k
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Post by -MiiLz. »

S.a.W Yall Came Hard On These Niggahs ..
i Dont Feel Like Quotin Tha Bars All Came Nice
Arv Had Some Creative Lines, So Did Scip But
Rell Came The Hardest
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