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Street Pharmacist
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol just 3 questions,why is u stressing? wats this shit tlkn for
who is u impressing?u cant pass me,so who is u testing?
ill knock you senseless,boy ull wake up guessin

u said i left,but im just tryna make my best,u choking on my dick
shut the fuck up and take a breath,my bars is like a hit of meth
but it will be stupidity that will bring u to ur death
ill calm u down and put u to rest u spit wild garbage no more or less

u thinking illest is gonna bring u success??but sucking dick in a coffin
will do u much best,u said u can leave pharm a mess?
ill slap that hoody off ur head,and reveal ur dress,bitch boy
homicide will be at ur adress,taking pictures of the shells all up in ur chest

come on nigga try to compare a gold fish to a eagle
and go bring ur sweet saw people,soft herbs cant fuk with the evil
and i love pussy so u know ima eat you
ur stupid face is like glass its see threw,ill destroy u,in any way im letheal

i let the 45 tuck u into bed and say goodnight
trust me there aint no farms in my hood aight?

u brusing ur fucking hands for all that shit u type
i know u pussy but dont act like u got 9 lives
i rather get money,then stay on the site and write lies

u can say u got 30 wins all day and night,n theres still no progress in site
it disgusts me that this fukn kite thinks hes even alright
hes the type that gets me tight till i get on a flight
and slap him in his mouth for gettin so hype

little boy ill leave u sleeping with the crabs,u a good boy tryna act bad
and its a matter of time that u will correct ur swag
cuz u aint a gangsta u a fag

arv ur vincible,ur soft and sweet thats the principle
so check urself twice before i really bring out the bitch in you.






Jump off my dick and break ur ankles soft nigga.
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Post by - Mutual - »

well some good lines but way to choppy none of the puches were that good
i jus didnt really like it
keep practisin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Arvincible »

Yeah keep practicin, u shudnt talk back if u can't hang street.
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol what ever,i was gonna throw that shit on a beat too it is choppy but yall gotta hear me spit it.
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