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[align=center]The guy's life is like a desert, there's not a soul to be found
Nothing's grown in there for a while, there's an echo but no sound
On the outside, ma lil' guy is broken like old plastics
The mind is working on the next tactic, planning to get his heart back from the attic
And while he's at it, flashbacks hit the times he tot were fantastic
But now his life is static, a pain in the flesh like government taxes
Put the memories behind him cuz he says he's way past it
Life ain't bout the dough you make, but the number of practice
That keeps you way above the waters like Jesus walked
The effort you put to something can't leave, a good name cannot be socks(spoilt)
So this guy woke up from the trance that he was in
Gotta get the life goin and get it goin in the morning
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Post by Tragedy »

i like it
it flowed perfect
and u had sum nice lines

That keeps you way above the waters like Jesus walked
The effort you put to something can't leave, a good name cannot be socks(spoilt

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can u drop sum feed on my latest drop
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welcome back good dope verse here
hope ya hit up the cyphers agin
8/10
dope all around really keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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thanks for the feed, y'all . . Much appreciated
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