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S. Dot W vs Duc3 *quick Battle*(Duc3)

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3-4 Bars

Voting Cats...

Flow
Multis
Metaphors
NamePlay/WordPlay
Punchlines

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Lmao @ Kobe how my ass taste..ALRIGHT
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[align=center]It's crazy how my bars go OVER you, I'd be surprised even if you know something
But just beat it off before you go crunching…Either way,
I'm still gonna have “YOU KO'd(UK Owed)â€
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Sorry For The Delay..Went To Tha Store...Forgot To Turn Off Tha Comp So It Said I Was Online....

[align=center]Eatin Ya No Homo On Da Cannibal Shit My Damages Lift..."Dot" Watch My "Defects" End Yo Flow...."PERIOD"!!!.....Like A "CANCEROUS CIST!!!"
Blastin'em With Long Range Rifles....Duke Loves It In Tha Ass..You'll See Him Always Debating Crack And I Dont Mean Hagglin Cocaine Prices!
After It I Bruise Ya Flesh...You Foolish? YES!..Witness My W's Tripple Up In Front Of Dot...Az If I Was Typin A Websites Full Address!!(www.whatever! haha)
I'll Murk Dis Faggot An His Clique ...You Have No Game...Girls Quick To Flip Off This "Tramp"..Similar To Gymnastic Chicks!
You Winnin? Nah Just Another Acid Trip....Let This Prank Stop..You Heavily Warned..Better Be Armed..Cuz Im Known To Bare Arms Like A Tank Top!!!
Bitch Check Tha Gun Game..Snitch Of Ya Hood..Is Definitely A Narc...Like R N B Pictures...He Known To Leave A Con (Akon) Framed!!!
That Gay Ish I Don't Play With...Im Going Apes BITCH!!..My Lyrics Hella Complexed..An Oakland Infestitation Is Tha Only Time You Could Say I'm Basic(Bay Sick)!!!
Mess Aroun Alone....I'll Test Out Tha Chrome....You Could Say This Is A Track Event In A Collesium..The Way I Leave A Shot Put(Shot Put) In Your Dome!!!
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Post by Haz »

This Battle Was Fuckin Fire..


Flow : Sdot
Multis : Duce
Metaphors : Sdot..
NamePlay/WordPlay : Tie. Cause Duce Takes Nameplay But Sdot Took Wordplay
Punchlines: Duce


My Bad Yall.. if i Was a Dick Ridin Faggot i'd Put One of Yall As Da Winner.
But this Was a Tie To Me.. So My Fault Lol..


Vote - Tie..
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Punchlines - Duc3 ..His Hit Harder, Way More Creative ..and Complex ..

Wordplay/Nameplay - S Dot Murked it But Not By Much ..

Multies - Duc3 ..His Flowed Together Nice and Natural ..And Tha Multies Was Kinda Hittin Too ..

Flow - Duc3 .. Same Reason as Tha Cat above, Also He Was inner Rhymin, Which Made Tha Flow More Creative ..

Metaphors - S Dot ..

This Battle Was a Good One ..
I Felt That Duc3 Snatched it Up ..
Not By Lots, and Not By a Little ..
But His Punches Were Nicer to Me, And S Dot Came Wit Tha Wordplay Which is Mah Favorite Cat ..
Kinda Murked it ..But I Felt Duc3 Came Better Than S Dot ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Çhåiñ$âw »

Flow - SW - Barely. Both were pretty choppy. Duc you REALLY gotta quit with all that nasty punctuation fam. It's like reading backwards or something. We know how to read homie, you don't gotta build elaborate picture frames around every standout concept or rhyme... please. Some is ok. That is too much.

Multis - Duc - Easy. SW, you need to work on your multies a bit.

Metaphors - Tie - Pretty close here. I could lean either way depending on how strict I am with the term "Metaphor" so I'm going to leave it a tie.

NamePlay/WordPlay - Duc - This guy really likes playin with words. SW, work on using some more subtle wordplay in your drops. It'll help a ton brotha.

Punchlines - Duc - Yeah, amongst that jumble of letters, I managed to find your punchlines. They were hot for the most part. As were yours, SW.



Overall, this was a great battle, with 2 awesome contenders. I look forward to seeing more well-rounded battles like this. Much respect to both of you.

Overall Vote: Duc3


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Post by Frank Black »

bitches...

2-0 lol duc3
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Post by Arvincible »

metaphors - S.W.
punches - Duc3 inched
flow - S.W. was easier to get, with or without inner rhymes,flow is the catch
wordplay/nameplay - Duc3 raped
multis - you guys all lie s.w killed it with multies, duc3 bolded a lot of stuff and his multis werent as nice

overall vote: SDotW
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

that tie vote was gay and pointless..n e ways..

Flow:duc3
Multis:duc3
Metaphors:sdotw (joker faced down)
NamePlay/WordPlay:duc3
Punchlines:duc3

vote:duc3

was a nice battle, but duc3 shat on dot lol, this was pretty hands down in my opinion

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3-1 uppin duc3
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Post by Çhåiñ$âw »

Arv, do you even know what a multi is? For someone who's as sick with multies as you, that comment surprised the fuck out of me, man. SW didn't have shit for multies. In fact, the second half of his verse is all single syllable rhymed. Know-something, go-crunching, euro-country: very basic multies. Take-shots, face-wash: again very basic. And that's the last of his multies. Are you mistaking internal rhyming for multies or something? You're fuckin nuts if you say SW killed multies, bro. Might wanna go readup on your elements again fam. No joke.
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Post by MagicMark »

Cats

Flow: SW - just cleaner, the shorter lines helped, Duc3 came more complex, so harder to keep flow smooth
Multis: Duc3 - with more complexity came more multis, pretty smooth, as said above, Sw's were okay, but a lil basic
Metaphors: SW - joker faces down was cool, it stood out to me, neither went crazy with meta's
NamePlay/WordPlay: Tie - Duc3 had more, but sdotw had some good shit too, UK ow'ed was the best of tha battle, duc3 had good shiz too, too close to call
Punchlines; Duc3- had more, and where a lil harder hitting in my opinion..

Shit - Tie'd on cats

well both came nice

ill go for Duc3 tho, SW's was nice, but Duc3 just came with more, and more plays

vote duc3
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lol Arv just voted against me and he knows it...S dot did good but we all know my multis were superior..

4-1...K.O.....Nice Battle S Dot.
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