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KIMBO SLICE THE PHONY`S

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Its dark and hell is hot, Cee`s the light, it's a solar invasion
These fags are all talk, bumpin their gums like molar abrasions
Your flows fruity and fermented, I guess ciders the brand for you
Fuck what ya man`ll do, with 8 legs even spiders aint standin you
I show NASA how to rocket (rock it), u know Cee owns the fake so stop it
My papers great I got it, like the virgin mary, coz im known to make a profit
Could pull a gun, fuck a blade to start, like Martin Luther how u vision piece
But i aint shootin son, ma brain`s razor sharp! im armed to the wisdom teeth
Now im in flip mode, never hit lows , got a noose now whats ya zip code
Think u a bad boy with piff odes?, only cell system u been in is ya lymph nodes
Fuck u, ur flips are “beneath Cee levelâ€
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Post by Çhåiñ$âw »

Siiiick.. I'm feelin that drop. Clever wordplay. Good creativity. Flow was a little choppy in certain spots, but overall, this was hot shit.

8/10
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Post by Cee4 »

thanks man. appreciated. yeah the flow is a bit choppy in spots. i just noticed that when i read it out again so im gonna tweek it a little
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Post by - Mutual - »

damm nice wordplay
nice vocab
dope multies
dope flow
i like dis shit right here ya
9.5/10
in places was a bit choppy but still good shit

Its dark and hell is hot, Cee`s the light, it's a solar invasion
These fags are all talk, bumpin their gums like molar abrasions
Your flows fruity and fermented, I guess ciders the brand for you
Fuck what ya man`ll do, with 8 legs even spiders aint standin you
I show NASA how to rocket (rock it), u know Cee owns the fake so stop it
My papers great I got it, like the virgin mary, coz im known to make a profit

my fave bit^
this really stuck out dunno why but well
keep'em comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
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I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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Post by Frank Black »

wordplay SICK!!...nice man...damn beatiful!
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Post by Arvincible »

Good shit cee, another good piece, u drop like every other month lol, but anyways, nice wordplay and ur punches connect.

Ur urinals and lymph-nodes bars were my faves.

Real dope.

9/10

If u can return the feed itd be appreciated. Thanks
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thanks for the weed. lol too fucked to be bothered returning the feed right now. i`ll defo get it done tommorrow
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Post by Scip »

flowed decently...multies were here and there but not very complex...ya wordplay was there and it caught my eye a little...overal i liked it


Fuck u, ur flips are “beneath Cee levelâ€
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Post by Kurse »

I was like, "Wtf does this have to do wit Kimbo Slice!?"

But I read the bar and with the overall of the verse I just recognized it to be so goon shit! Just like Kimbo.

GOOON SQUAAAAAD!!!

Dope as drop though. I had a nice instrumental goin at the time I was readin this, ya know...this shit would make a sick audio. Flow's perfectly to a beat. I think you should get a mic son, cuz the lyrics are sick!
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