Yah. You do.
Your feedback helped me get a lot better.
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yeah i've noticed your improvement, good shit homie
i mean their are only a select few verses that i would even consider perfect written by professsional mcs so even if a verse is "nice" leaving construtive critism is better than just saying "that was nice"
i mean their are only a select few verses that i would even consider perfect written by professsional mcs so even if a verse is "nice" leaving construtive critism is better than just saying "that was nice"
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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