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this is site is nothing but DRAMA ne more...no wonder people baerly join...
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PrecisE wrote:invincible... you, are a dumbass, straight up.

and tramatik, that comment he made was to you not all killah, then all killah contradicted and said "no this piece isnt garbage" basically, then "invincible queer-assist" had a little episode of PMS.

lol, invincible dont be such a fag, thats my best advice for you, drop something half decent before you cop an attitude... word, you drive me nuts sometimes lol
finally someone else with a decent reading comprehension lol

and viral i don't really try to start "drama" i just call shit wack when its wack and call people fucking idiots when they post shit thats stupid, 95% of the posts in this section are overly positive for no reason, if a dude writes something and asks for feedback posting random props just to be nice isn't helping them out at all thats why some people never elevate cause people tell them their nice when they write dogshit down so they continue to write the same typa dogshit
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Invincible »

First of all, Killah makes a good point and I hope most of you would run with it. Thanks everyone for the comments though. Basically I was saying don't repost recycled lines. Like I said before. Tramatik your verse was good.
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invincible-lyricist wrote:Before you continue to come copy and paste. It's not recycable son it's garbage in the waste. Overall it was alright.
LOL I agree with invisible.
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thanx appeciate it
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Post by Viral »

all killah wrote:
PrecisE wrote:invincible... you, are a dumbass, straight up.

and tramatik, that comment he made was to you not all killah, then all killah contradicted and said "no this piece isnt garbage" basically, then "invincible queer-assist" had a little episode of PMS.

lol, invincible dont be such a fag, thats my best advice for you, drop something half decent before you cop an attitude... word, you drive me nuts sometimes lol
finally someone else with a decent reading comprehension lol

and viral i don't really try to start "drama" i just call shit wack when its wack and call people fucking idiots when they post shit thats stupid, 95% of the posts in this section are overly positive for no reason, if a dude writes something and asks for feedback posting random props just to be nice isn't helping them out at all thats why some people never elevate cause people tell them their nice when they write dogshit down so they continue to write the same typa dogshit

i kno u dont try to start it...but thats all that ever goes around here...thats y i mentioned it...lol
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