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MesaR
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HUGE MULTIS.

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i'm sick of this lame-that-bites,i'll smash ya brain-with-pipes
cause i'm never tame-in-fights, and if he claim-he-writes
i'll shame-his-life, maim-his-wife, with a blade-and-knife!
iv'e played-ya-twice, he'd prayed-his-nice, ill have ya vein-to-slice
could not have ya name-in-lights, only time ya cool headed, when ya brain-in-ice
seeing this? i'm glad-your-there cause yall just cant add-the-flare
alright, ya rap-is-fair?, you'll get hit wit a rachet-square, only cause i had-to-share!
i'm stopping-you-bitches, when im dropping-the-sickness,if you's are victims im popping-the-witness
got ya dropping-in-stitches, blocking-ya-disses, drops like these sequence is rocking-the-scriptures!,
who would rep-this-lame-fuck? blanking out? yep-ya-brain-stuck,step-ya-game-up,
who said-your-fame-stuck? ill cover it up for hours,like ya slept-with-make-up,

quick multi key
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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- Mutual -
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Post by - Mutual - »

well bombin on the mutlies
lovely shit
didnt really like the first line as much but the rest swept that up easyily
nice flow
obviously nice multies
8.5/10
good stuff

i'll shame-his-life, maim-his-wife, with a blade-and-knife!
iv'e played-ya-twice, he'd prayed-his-nice, ill have ya vein-to-slice
could not have ya name-in-lights, only time ya cool headed, when ya brain-in-ice

my fav bit^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Vertikal »

blade-and-knife

Same thing Scott.
Good flow, some lines were forced.
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ÐÛÇ£»
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

should of said serated knife lol but yeah good drop multis deffo on point 7.5/10 doe..
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

eh.. its O..k..nothin great mr "MULTI KING"(cough)..lame ass

i expected alot more multis and a bit more consistency..

one two many forced multis
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Post by Haz »

Your Multis Wus Ass Brotha..
The Overrall Verse Wus aiight..
U Forced Da Shit Out Of Some Bars dough..
keep Doin u
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