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Choices ft woods

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Woods = Magic Mark btw

[font=Times New Roman][align=center]Which choice will he make?

*Sean sits back and imagines what his life will be like if he make certain choices*

Lives full of fights, followed by tragical drive by's at night
Laughed and joked as ironically he decides to die for his life
...
Countless extensive overreactions from swallowin' pills
Beaten daily to make him tough by 'family', yet followed em still
In his mothers eye's an angel, yet owned a satanic reflection
Spent everyday of his life, snorting lines and planning injections
Robbin' stores and pensioners for the penny's in purses
Shoot up a dose of heroin, hits the streets again as he searches
With a friend as its purchased in the nights he's moving dope
Livid life on the streets, repeating famous movie quotes
You'd assume he's broke, staring at rough n ragged wear
Moved to bridges taggin' there, greasy slicked back crabby hair
Went wrong on one night, soon a deal was destined to bust
Knew his friends as his family, and the rest he would trust
He knew by standing by someone wants him when wanting his friends
As predicted in his the back of his mind, someone wanted revenge
Stood alone on the corner awaiting buyers to purchase
A car sped past and bullets were fired...Sean lays in pain alive on the surface
Blood pouring from wounds bullets had tore on his chest
Repeating in his mind, "im a dying solider, this is war at it's best"
Staring at a fading picture, a bullet wound he clutches n holds
Ya see reaching his toes, was the closest he come to touching his soul
Deciding against this choice of money no decision was left
Could he possibly take a route that created a vision of death?
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Lives full of fights, followed by tragical drive by's at night
Laughed and joked as ironically... he'd decide to die for his life

Yup...switch it up woods

Soul been opened in two, but im hoping that new
chances arise cause the dance I despise has left me broken and blue
A gun life, with fun fights had been callin me' its frighten'n
But one night, some guy should have seen that all I need's enlightn'n
A teacher to preach of the ways to do the right thing
but I had already seen the world of evil that only the devil's side brings
Seen the hustlers at work, sling'in, the murder n' the violence
'Momma tried to stop me ridin', she knew the hurt that pain n' lies did
Sat me down, jus' us around, n' said, “first id learn what pride isâ€
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it has a good flow
nice concept nice multies on point
good stuff
i liked it 8/10

Soul been opened in two, but im hoping that new
chances arise cause the dance I despise has left me broken and blue
A gun life, with fun fights had been callin me' its frighten'n
But one night, some guy should have seen that all I need's enlightn'n

my fave bit by woods ^
this is sum nice rhymes there

Countless extensive overreactions from swallowin' pills
Beaten daily to make him tough by 'family', yet followed em still
In his mothers eye's an angel, yet owned a satanic reflection
Spent everyday of his life, snorting lines and planning injections

my fave bit^
man great lines
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Props, thanks man
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