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16 Micz
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Cries Of Illest

Post by 16 Micz »

heheheheehehh

everybody remember the days when this shit used to be all fun and games
but now these bumbs have came, shamed, and slummed our name
so whose the one to blame, who can numb our pain
who can come, reign, shame, and make this rapping fun again
you see we tired of hearin about all the dymes you've touched
all the nines you've bust, and all tha tough rhymin stuff
if this forum could think, it would probably want you to leave
prolly want to grief, prolly want you to BLEED....
see, half you niggas prolly dont want to believe
and then you got the other emcees, nonchalantly agree-in
hopin Illest doesnt bring another mother fuckin european
all these new rappers startin to bore me
quotin me in their sigs only proves how they adore me
they really wanna ignore me, but still admire my glory
some want to destroy me, but most of ya'll just annoy me
do us all a favor, stop reppin ILLEST cause your rhymes are just corny

leave a link ill return the feed.
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Post by 16 Micz »

lol i really don't have it anymore.
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Post by HKX »

shit was sick nigga I like dis drop 4rm u u got off
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Post by Arvincible »

lol Wow mics u can write?

this is true though i hope ur not talking about me, cuz i been here half a year...

anyways i like the topic. keep writing nigga
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Post by Dead Silence »

good shit
i saw that line towards me
haha

overall impressive

hopin Illest doesnt bring another mother fuckin european
^me 2
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Post by 16 Micz »

thanks for the feed, i did'nt expect anyone to like it but ok....

and i didnt even know you were european silence, tha brings so much more meaning to that line.
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Post by precise »

good drop dude, i dont necessarily agree with it because activity is activity n skill comes with time, but ill give you a kudos for writing something that was pretty decent, it was a great read, keep witing.. cause its been.. like 53 years i think since the last time u dropped? roughly
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Post by - Mutual - »

man good shit i liked it nice concept multies wre on point and pretty good flow
and i'm european who cares i'll get better no beef anyhow good stuff
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Smh ..
Lol Koo Little Drop Asshole ..
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Post by DressToKill »

You definently got a Kayne West type of swagger..I could just hear his voice on this haha..Naw son dont downplay your work this was pretty nice even though Im kinda one of the people your talking about cuz I am new lol?Anyways keep up

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dopeness-vt9480.html

would appreciate some feed on that if you got time..thanks
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Post by Haz »

It's Aiight
U Had Alotta Forced Shit..
Nothin Impressive...
i Feel Like a 2 Year Old Could Write Some Shit like Dis...

but it's Kool Dat you Dropd so Do you
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Post by Dead Silence »

im not European sooooo
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Post by Kurse »

Good to see you drop again pimp. A lil rusty...you can tell by the slight hesitations in a few parts that you wrote, but overall it was worth the read. Few more drops and you should have ur ol' game back!
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Re: Cries Of Illest

Post by 88SkyLink »

Nice drop man, and I can't help but agree with you, there's a lot of whack-ass rappers giving dope rhymers grief, I like the way you displayed it, but I feel if you added more punchlines and wordplays, it would've been the icing on the cake
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