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Dead Silence Diss...

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Duke's no where near my level... and been shafting me with dodgy votes in the battlefield lol, or maybe he dont like my style... but that IN ITSELF... is a reason for a diss... so no bitchin.. just dissin...


imma be deckin' him with ease, bitch, im a vet so the tech's will leave him bleedin'
So its gonna be dead silence at a funeral, but not respect for the deceased, kid


beat me, na ill end him first, his votes or his dick? i wonder which is bent the worst..
Im Fuckin' mad, I'll fuckin' smash dead in the street like im gonna "rear end" a hearse

shots testin' this queer, molestin his best, he should fear..
cause you remind me of your mum, been fuckd' by 21 men, in less than a year!!!

Now cut the multi shit, im kill his kids, im a THUG... you bitch!!
Not given me the Punches and Personals... when the THREE above you did!! (coincidence)

Everyone be loving my style, its wild, you just a fucking child
i only been here for a minute.. n' i still got a higher profile

leave him bleedin' from his temple, seething with a send him
to hell and back, cause imma end silence, like screaming in a temple

punches leave him fucked up... if "silence" even makes a sound.. kill him..
why you acting tough.. you already look fucked.. like an eminem with down syndrome!!


personals sick.. they rip his nose, im a pro so imma kill this ho
im the cleanest, so watch me "rip DS".. like im fuckin' "mad at Nintendo"

what?...

lets keep it productive...
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Post by - Mutual - »

well this wasnt bad i'm sure you could diss better than that
but well it was about a 6/10 not really that good but it was OK

Now cut the multi shit, im kill his kids, im a THUG... you bitch!!
Not given me the Punches and Personals... when the THREE above you did!! (coincidence)

My Fave Bit^
nice point but you really should've settled this in the battle grounds
lol you got beef wit Dead so's sequence i wonder who's next
by the way the feed link it's over a week ago ya left feed
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Magic Mark Stfu You Won't Even Respond To My Topic...But Overall This Was Alright....
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Post by Omega Bill »

[font=Comic Sans MS]Keep the freeposts and shit talking out of the Scriptures. That's just fucking retarded and immature.

Leave feed or don't fucking post.[/font]
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Post by Arvincible »

Lol dude dead silence isn't gonna hit u back, he's still a novice at this, but yeah anyways....

This piece was so-so, ur multis we're kinda basic and some bars didn't even rhyme, unless u went weezy and gave the word a stress. Like kill him and syndrome, idk lol

But it was a piece I had to read cuz I wanted to see what u had to say

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Post by MagicMark »

lol true

in all honesty.. no hate to silence lol, im sure its just a misunderstandin' or maybe not.. its whatever.. when i wrote it i seen i lost to you and was a little heated... and i seen he gave u a clean sweep (?) maybe, i can't remember.. anyways it definately wasn't a clean sweep victory... for any of us.. imo.... so i was a little mad at that

he can come back with what he wants... and it'll be no hate, ill feed approprately

and this is just a little something, may switch my style up to something im a little more comfortable with... but its whatever

good looks for feedin guys...

and my bad for freepostin' will try to keep it to a minimum in the future lol
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Post by Omega Bill »

It wasn't you I was bitching at man, it's YOUR drop, lol.
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Post by ..DaGreatest.. »

last bar and first ones were tha best..
Ok fah a diss tho u know
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