this beat is hot and i just wanted some feedback. the beat is called " Sweat " and if you go to my site www.infiniteanthems.com then you just click play...it will be right in front of you. i would greatly appreciate it if you rated it too. just a simple click...
thanks, UD3
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feedback needed plz!!! new beat!! " Sweat "
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i like da beat
sounded pretty nice
man its great i'd love to hear someone rap to it but
i aint got a mic any more so i cant
7/10
keep'em comin
sounded pretty nice
man its great i'd love to hear someone rap to it but
i aint got a mic any more so i cant
7/10
keep'em comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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sounds a lil too crazy for rap but it'd make a good techno/dance track, some nice melodys & breakdowns props
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
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You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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