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Haz
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Post by Haz »

Quality Was Good.
Flow Was Strait.
Didnt Like How U Copied Rick Rosses Shit Exactly.
Bill Verse Wus Kool Thought Da Down South Part Wus Corny
Thought Da Camel Spit Hard Shit Wus Str8. But Da Whole
Shit Bout My Pops Wus False. Cause i Dunt Even Kno Da Niggah..

Da Rell Verse Wus Da Corniest In My Opinion

Da Whole "I Touch Boys Like a Catholic Preist"
Come on Now.. i Felt Like U Came Best on Da Second Verse.
Again Da Flow Wus On Point. It Jus Sounds Like Ur Missin a Lung
With ya Raspy Ass Voice .
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Kurse
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Post by Kurse »

Thanks for feedin...
I dunno what a lung has to do wit my voice though...haha
I just have a raspy voice...thats all.
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Subsist
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Good job Kurse. It was a cool track. It was funny, flawless and some fags got bitch slapped. :P
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-TraMaTiK-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

bills verse wuz funny no probs there
haz's verse i think cudda been executed a bit better then how u layed it down but it wuz still good
rells verse wuz in my opinion the weakest idk what it iz about it,maybe cuz u dissed em like 80times?lol

but ur flow wuz good as usual,nice lil boredom project
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Omega Bill
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Post by Omega Bill »

Cee4 - Yeah, there's no beef, haha. I know when it's just for shits and giggles and when it's a diss. I'm cool with Kurse.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lyrics Were Kinda Basic Bro....But You Said This Was A Little Fun Fun So I Don't Take It Seriously...Ya Can Probably Do Better....Step Ya Lyricism Up Tho....
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