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My Dependence On You(Poetic Rap)..

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I Use To Have No Needs...But With Her Im Dependin On Love..
.And I'll Be Damn If They Take Here Away Like A Fien Defendent On Drugs...
It Was What It Was.. I Love It When We Have Sex...
You Stickin Out For Me Even Doe I Gave You A Bad Rep..
Ooooh Just Every Little Aspect...Ya Affection For Me Pierced Me Like An Arrow From An Aztec...
We In The Sheets You On Top ..Time To Switch The Groove..
Ya Womb Serves As The Opposin Camp...Just Let My Dick Intrude...
Az You Bare Witness That I Am A Little Explicit
And I Promise With My Lovin ..Kisses... You'll Catch The Passion Sickness
I Embedded Your Image Deep Inside My Soul...I Forever Hold The Witness
My Heart...Which You Have Cut Me Opened..I Think Now I Need Stitches
But With Each Visit I Hesitate To Say Arreviderci...Oh How It Hurts Me..
Because Tha Fire In Ya Eyes Makes Me Despise The Reason The Sun Rise..
Let Every Son Cry..Cuz You And Your Moments Are Mine And I Cherish Them...
Plus The Sun's Fire..... Would Crumble In Comparison...
Embarrassin How You Flatter Me..You Got Me In A Hole..And This Ain Sparta...But I Could Agree Its Blasphemy...
Tragedy Strikes Once I Hear Ya Call...I Wanna Expose My Love To You....To Make Sure Them Tears Will Fall
And I Love Pleasin You...The Pleasure For Your Endeavers...Love Makin It ..Oh So Clever...
Your Sweet Warm Personality Could Keep Me Runnin Forever...I Keep My Hands Crossed..One On The Lever..
Cuz Once I Pull The Switch You Drop Into My Arms...Ya Alarmed By My Charm..
But Babe I Must Warn Once Your Gone I Feel Scorned...
Caressin You..Cuz You Blessin Duce With Ya Presence An Essence....
Let Our Love Calls Rang Out To Be Heard In The Heavens.....


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nice stuff i liked the concept

And I Promise With My Lovin ..Kisses... You'll Catch The Passion Sickness
I Embedded Your Image Deep Inside My Soul...I Forever Hold The Witness
My Heart...Which You Have Cut Me Opened..I Think Now I Need Stitches

thats was my fave bit nice shit though keep'em comin i like ya flow style
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Thanks Bro...I Was Listenin To A Smooth Instrumental And The Idea Of A Love Song Just Popped Up..So I Ran With It..
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Yo Da First Half Wus ALOOOOOT Better Den Da Second Half
I Wusnt Feelin Da Second half Like Dat For Some Reason.
Thought Dis Wus Kool..

I Use To Have No Needs...But With Her Im Dependin On Love..
.And I'll Be Damn If They Take Here Away Like A Fien Defendent On Drugs...
It Was What It Was.. I Love It When We Have Sex...
You Stickin Out For Me Even Doe I Gave You A Bad Rep..
Ooooh Just Every Little Aspect...Ya Affection For Me Pierced Me Like An Arrow From An Aztec...
We In The Sheets You On Top ..Time To Switch The Groove..
Ya Womb Serves As The Opposin Camp...Just Let My Dick Intrude...
Az You Bare Witness That I Am A Little Explicit
And I Promise With My Lovin ..Kisses... You'll Catch The Passion Sickness
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

I Know..The First Half Is Actually The Second Half I Wrote It In Note Pad As Two Diff Parts..
Just Happened TO Copy N Paste In Diff Order...Cuz I Wanted To Lead On Into The Dependency...But Yeah Thanks..
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feed link?
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Post by ..DaGreatest.. »

agreein wit da niggas above for quotes.. sick topical bruh.. keep it up
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What You Mean Feed Link? 0_o Im Confused...
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..i`m Mos Deffo Feelin This Scrip ..
It Was Mad Different Comin From U ..
Cus I See U as a Battle Head ..
It`s a Sick Drop ..
Esp. Tha Beginnin ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Thanks Bro... Nah I'm Not Just A Battle Rapper..I'm All Around.... I Just Find Battling Entertaining And A Good Way Of Touching Up...But Yeah..I Mos Def Appreciate The Feed Back... Propz.
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