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collabo with young dank

Post by precise »

done the verse, like the lyrics, lemme know about the vocals, i can always re-record
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Haha this was good man but precise you kind of went out of flow at some places.
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Post by complexity »

I think it was the little speedups. Even though its a kinda cool thing to do. On this particular beat. I don't know if it works. Thats just my opinion.
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Post by Viral »

i thought it was pretty straight...young dank sounds pretty dope...n precise sounded dope...cept da vocals sounded a lil iffy...like dey seemed to be in da background kinda..like not totally up front
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Post by X-Acute »

Young Dank - Precise, complete opposites......lol.....yall did a nice job wit this one but Precises flow was kinda choppy...props
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Post by complexity »

Yah its a little strange with the chorus saying n****
a million times. Then precise comes on. Lmao.
Styles are completely different.
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Post by precise »

yea true lol, thanks for all the feed, ill probably redo the verse, make the collab better, about the complete opposites thing, i was thinkin thats what would make it a good collab lol, not listenin to the same shit for the whole track
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Post by Young Dank »

haha, good stuff...my first beat I ever made, i got 4 more now
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Post by Invincible »

Nice collab. I actually liked the two styles.
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Post by precise »

thanks for feed

ey you made this beat? damn, its nice as hell lol
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Post by Young Dank »

appreciate that dawg...
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