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Viral n X-acute wit AME guest appearance

Post by Viral »

here it is...leave some feedback
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

the vocal balance was a bit off since it got louder when viral came in and kurse had his usual lyrical content nothing impressive... overall it was decent
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Post by Viral »

yeah thats cuz x acute added effects to his voice and didnt make seperate vocal tracks so i couldnt get ne thing done with his verse n shit....next time tho...


this wasnt one of those impress ne body tracks it was jst somethin to do....next track will be a different story tho
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MAAAN ALL THIS FEEDBACK IS OVER WHELMING!!...
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Post by Buddha »

it was aite theres my feedback ya bum
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Post by Young Dank »

damn that was tight, good shit viral, ame and Tuxx, i think Viral a cold rapper though, that was tight
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Young Dank wrote:damn that was tight, good shit viral, ame and Tuxx, i think Viral a cold rapper though, that was tight

i saw u say somethin about havin like 4 beats er somethin...if u want....we can get down a collab n shit...let me kno

oh n btw AME is Anger Manij'ment Entertainment...Kurse is the actual rappers name..jst so ya kno...but i can see where u got it bein AME after he repeats it n shit..lol....but yea get at me bout a collab...n if ne one else is down for one also let me kno...

more feedback would be appreciated

Thanks for the feedback received so far also
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Post by drunken jesus »

x-acute - the vocal effects you put on this ruined any replay value it may've had

viral - nice verse i liked the flow switch-up's

kurse - flow needed some work i wasn't feeling all of the pauses lyrically it was strait

wasn't really feeling kurse's yelling before the verses either lol
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Post by Invincible »

it was alright 1st verse was too low though
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Post by X-Acute »

ready for a new collab, n' we'll do it the right way this time. Viral, you might have to walk me through it...lol......I'll get ahold of you on MSN.....
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

huh? how come i cant d/l your tracks -n- shit on here man, kinda upset about it.... let me know what i need to do

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Post by Viral »

wat happens wen u hit download?...dats weird shit..there shouldnt be a problem for u downloading em...if it doesnt work again...let me kno i can send it to ya if u want

yea x acute hit me up wenever ur on man...
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Post by Subsist »

You press the little button that says download , thats what i did at least.
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Post by complexity »

Ghost, I think there was problem today and yesterday. It should all be good now.
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