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Fucked Up Keystyle

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I'm insane-cuz-im-Asian, another played chinese joke and im sprayin-up-the-nation
I be Slayin-caucasians, but you stupid hos dont know that im also racist-on-occations
You cant imagine-to-say-this, I smack the cracker nerds that are naggin-to-play-chess
Never tired of laughin-at-gay-shit and those off the boat beaners hangin-at-payless
Im on the hate-list, i spit acid but i dont mean amino, i just really like to slap-latinos
You all saw what i did to raiza, smashed-a-pino, and fuck chinks i'd also cap-a-chino/ cappucino
Cuz thats how i stay up, show black people how to do a lay up, cuz they basically-so-tough
Put all of them niggas in a small cup, and ship them all to war cuz their genetically-so-'buff'
I tea-bag/T-bag ur bitches,cum inside so they can have-it-maybe n make a race of half-flip-babies
That idea sounds captivating but the thought of an AR take over on the site 4 bein active lately
Is more amusin than this rap-shit-hating, fuck italians, they should just stick to makin-pringles
And illest niggas needa stop tryna attract when they datin-singles, attack like its ''mate-n-mingle''
Illest aint a love-site you Nut-fucks, imma take this mic and shove it right into ur sluts'-butts
Cuz i hate gay niggas talkin like they want a 'rub-up' , i ain't stuck-up, but i talk like im fucked-up


lol this was a fun little key-style, i was trying to play with my words a lot
and yeah u guys should understand my style already.. juss tell me what u think, all feed appreciated
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forr surre thanks
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thanks bruh uppin for more feed eh?
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Jump off My Nuts
Quit Tryna Spit like ya Idol bitch
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lmao stop freeposting and stop thinking everyone is taking ur crack-head style.
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Post by Glamtrash »

This was good.. One of the better ones I've read of yours, though not your best.

Is more amusin than this rap-shit-hating, fuck italians, they should just stick to makin-pringles
And illest niggas needa stop tryna attract when they datin-singles, attack like its ''mate-n-mingle''
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Post by HU22ICANE »

ay bro I liked this. It was funny. But I think the more I read, the more I learn. So get ready I'm about to drop bombs on u nikkas.

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Good looking out. And dont worry about these pussy ass niggas acting hard behind a keyboard.
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Post by Meta-the-DEMON »

Good shit man... I see you're trying to step it up. Your multies were a little forced but it's cool.. You're workin' on it. Saw some wordplay too (Cap-a-chino, etc.. Nice)... It coulda been better but shit man.. I see you elevating. Props.
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Post by Arvincible »

Yeah thanks meta, I appreciate the feed
And hu22icane, don't trip I got this shit. Lol
When ur ready just come battle me whenever kid.
And dfl I really want to know which drop u really liked from me so I can stick to that style more eh? K thanks ppl
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