Punchline battle
10 bars
due 24 after check ins
no dick/hate votes lol
3 CATS TO VOTE ARE:
PUNCHLINES
FLOW
ENTERTAINMENT
disses aint required coz personals aint a category here
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Cee4 vs Hazard(Haz)
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Cee4 vs Hazard(Haz)
Last edited by Cee4 on Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:48 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Haz
- Supreme Lyricist
- Posts: 6800
- Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
- Wins: 67
- Losses: 70
- Location: The Port
Boo Me, SIKE CHAIR! Fa Hazard "Put Um Up" Like SPIKED HAIR!
Flow Similar To a ESTUARY, Like a Horror Flic Kill-a-Acta The Sequels 2 Have his EXTRA BURIED
Wonderin Who CATERS AIDS?! u Lookin For a Cold blooded Animal Like a GATOR RAID
Yes This Cat Rhymes of DAT NINE Cus i "KEEP DAT (STILL)" Like a FLAT LINE!
Get Pulled ova By Cops if in ya COOP THEY FRISK Keep ya "Cool" Like not Tradin ya LUPE DISK
Pigs Bring More K-NINEZ Den Armyz Dun, Since My Headoff My Shouldaz Dey Dis-ARM-ME-SON
Potateo Ova the Top i Call it a "Large Fry" it Puts a "Whole-in-um" Like Dey Ate its LARGE PIE
Afta Doods Done i Say SUP VAT i Spit on um den "Put um ina pit" Like a PUP SHOT!
Whoevas a Punchline King CONTESTENT SEE Know i Ain Losin Nothin Like COMPLEXITY!
u Against Drugz Den Dont MESS WITH ME it'll Be a Eclispe, Day u Wont PROGRESS TA SEE
Seal ya Lips Tight Like a Togetha-Cunt i'll Drop a Big Show Like May WEATHAS STUNT
Im Enuff Of a Monster To PISS A SIN u Aint Beatin Me Like you dont Believe in DIS-A-PLIN!
ur Markd Gay Fa "Pencils a Chaser" u Got long Hair & "WEAR IT DOWN" Like a PENCIL EARSER!
Wait For a Kiss-of-Death when Dat "Thin-Chrome-Flirt" It'll "HUG A BODY" Like JIM JONES SHIRT!
Ima "Ol Dirty Bastard" Repin Red Man C-METH ima UNSOLVED PROBLEM Like Pimp C'S-DEATH!
When im Drunk And Fill That SHELL CASE Shit'll Get Uglier Then Hell RELLS-FACE!
Dawg u SICK WIT A HEART? Itz Like a ima Black Hair Dresser How i'll PICK YA APART
When i Cruise & Chec Honeys in The SAND YO i See MORE PUSSY Than ORLANDO!( BITCH)
Ain Alone Like a Bunch-in-a-Ring i Bring a Force, its like a swing ain a Gun cus a PUNCH AIN A THING!
u Tryna "Line up fa Death" Like u gota YAYO SMELL Like American Online ( AYYY OHH WELL!!)
Flow Similar To a ESTUARY, Like a Horror Flic Kill-a-Acta The Sequels 2 Have his EXTRA BURIED
Wonderin Who CATERS AIDS?! u Lookin For a Cold blooded Animal Like a GATOR RAID
Yes This Cat Rhymes of DAT NINE Cus i "KEEP DAT (STILL)" Like a FLAT LINE!
Get Pulled ova By Cops if in ya COOP THEY FRISK Keep ya "Cool" Like not Tradin ya LUPE DISK
Pigs Bring More K-NINEZ Den Armyz Dun, Since My Headoff My Shouldaz Dey Dis-ARM-ME-SON
Potateo Ova the Top i Call it a "Large Fry" it Puts a "Whole-in-um" Like Dey Ate its LARGE PIE
Afta Doods Done i Say SUP VAT i Spit on um den "Put um ina pit" Like a PUP SHOT!
Whoevas a Punchline King CONTESTENT SEE Know i Ain Losin Nothin Like COMPLEXITY!
u Against Drugz Den Dont MESS WITH ME it'll Be a Eclispe, Day u Wont PROGRESS TA SEE
Seal ya Lips Tight Like a Togetha-Cunt i'll Drop a Big Show Like May WEATHAS STUNT
Im Enuff Of a Monster To PISS A SIN u Aint Beatin Me Like you dont Believe in DIS-A-PLIN!
ur Markd Gay Fa "Pencils a Chaser" u Got long Hair & "WEAR IT DOWN" Like a PENCIL EARSER!
Wait For a Kiss-of-Death when Dat "Thin-Chrome-Flirt" It'll "HUG A BODY" Like JIM JONES SHIRT!
Ima "Ol Dirty Bastard" Repin Red Man C-METH ima UNSOLVED PROBLEM Like Pimp C'S-DEATH!
When im Drunk And Fill That SHELL CASE Shit'll Get Uglier Then Hell RELLS-FACE!
Dawg u SICK WIT A HEART? Itz Like a ima Black Hair Dresser How i'll PICK YA APART
When i Cruise & Chec Honeys in The SAND YO i See MORE PUSSY Than ORLANDO!( BITCH)
Ain Alone Like a Bunch-in-a-Ring i Bring a Force, its like a swing ain a Gun cus a PUNCH AIN A THING!
u Tryna "Line up fa Death" Like u gota YAYO SMELL Like American Online ( AYYY OHH WELL!!)
Must be a vegetarian
Coz when I started the beefin, he pulled up his dress and was leavin
But Haz still drinks milk from his mamas breast so I guess he aint Veagan
No drugs but he got that powder puff, like a gay con-done in the shower slut
Losin ya vision, I`ll make ya world go blacker than Compton in a power cut
Im just Like a Viagra reaction, I come hard when its time 4 some action
Ur a comic book bad guy, ya punches should be outlined with a caption
My punches on point like decimal fractions, face it ya best will get bettered
Fag, I`ll see Rakim and Dre drop a record before my record gets checkered
Commanding respect kid, Lyrical nail in ya coffin by the hammer to the neck
Im Bringin drama to ya set, spittin these rhymes like a Llama with Tourettes
and Haz my Karmas better yet, retaliation! I always “get-backâ€
Coz when I started the beefin, he pulled up his dress and was leavin
But Haz still drinks milk from his mamas breast so I guess he aint Veagan
No drugs but he got that powder puff, like a gay con-done in the shower slut
Losin ya vision, I`ll make ya world go blacker than Compton in a power cut
Im just Like a Viagra reaction, I come hard when its time 4 some action
Ur a comic book bad guy, ya punches should be outlined with a caption
My punches on point like decimal fractions, face it ya best will get bettered
Fag, I`ll see Rakim and Dre drop a record before my record gets checkered
Commanding respect kid, Lyrical nail in ya coffin by the hammer to the neck
Im Bringin drama to ya set, spittin these rhymes like a Llama with Tourettes
and Haz my Karmas better yet, retaliation! I always “get-backâ€
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Arvincible
- Unstoppable Emcee
- Posts: 2304
- Joined: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:05 pm
- Wins: 67
- Losses: 18
- Location: So Cal
-.HaZarD.- wrote:
Wait For a Kiss-of-Death when Dat "Thin-Chrome-Flirt" It'll "HUG A BODY" Like JIM JONES SHIRT!
Ima "Ol Dirty Bastard" Repin Red Man C-METH ima UNSOLVED PROBLEM Like Pimp C'S-DEATH!
u Tryna "Line up fa Death" Like u gota YAYO SMELL Like American Online ( AYYY OHH WELL!!)
Lol these were ur best and you mentioned cee on ur shit as much as he did you.
^^^wooow. lmao! fuckin great..cee4 wrote: I`m a friend of ya screams, just like your alarm clock I`ll put and end to ya dreams
Im the male-the word alpha best suits, best of 08? I`ll have u eating ya words like its alphabet soup!!!
Im Bringin drama to ya set, spittin these rhymes like a Llama with Tourettes
Cat sweep Kids...all to cee.
Haz, u might wanna try having explainations for a couple of ur lines for me to get ur punch..but u did good, its just Cee was a step ahead of you on all three cats. Funny battle guys.
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WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
- Elite Freestyler
- Posts: 333
- Joined: Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:02 am
- Wins: 2
- Losses: 2
Vote Hazard
Flow/Cee4
Punches/Hazard
Entertainment/Hazard
Cee4 was smooth but lines wasn't clever enough..The meta/simile/wordplay all play into the punch. Cee4's lines were either not as clever enough or to simple. Hazard came decent, his bars weren't supported enough. But I was feelin the Jim Jone line, and Pimp C was a good concept but not enough support to make that part impacting enough.
Flow/Cee4
Punches/Hazard
Entertainment/Hazard
Cee4 was smooth but lines wasn't clever enough..The meta/simile/wordplay all play into the punch. Cee4's lines were either not as clever enough or to simple. Hazard came decent, his bars weren't supported enough. But I was feelin the Jim Jone line, and Pimp C was a good concept but not enough support to make that part impacting enough.
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.
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