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Post by Concept »

Ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/
I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/
ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/
I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/

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Naw I didn't bite the lines I just revised the structure/
my rhymes puncture, thunder and lightening blind struck ya/
my styles the kind thatll touch ya/
leave you beggin for more like my mind fucked ya/
now tell me that aint kill, to much for BILL/
slash ya skill the underworlds FRESH PRINCE just ask WILL/
cash kills so I don't want no phat bank account/
blast steel and military tanks ta take em out/
bring em out, my vocal drive will do the rest/
through the text, ill show you who the best/
we hazardous, came up and mastered this/
lyrically molested em like priest thats Catholic/
the games done changed and I aint havin it/
the illest flame brought by me and who im rappin wit/
look, these cats used ta laugh at it/
now they all gasping for breath as if they asthmatic/
witness the attack of a bad habit/
graphic, ya shits played out and ive done had it/
its common sense, loss consciousness/
and watch how Concept gets/
me ta the beats the perfect condiment/
its kinda sick, when we start ta spit/
we'll bring pain ta ya crew today/
747 hijacked plane and flew away/
was brought here to introduce the new way/
welcome to the crib take off your boots and stay
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Post by Merkz »

i liked this shit man flowed well n overall it was a good peice G id say 8.5/10
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Post by drunken jesus »

you bit that lil chorus part from juice
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by complexity »

ironically his first line says
Naw I didn't bite the lines I just revised the structure/
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