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thaphantom
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Freestyle: Let it go

Post by thaphantom »

People bringing drama and hate.
I'ma hoping just to see my fate.
How much will it take, i'm so lost right at this moment.
waiting just with no faith, I cant move on cause old shit.
Really i'm just wanting you to know this, i'm stuck in a whole world of pain.
Cant teach a old dog a new trick, my feelings for my ex girl aint changed.
i'm lost in denial can you see the facts?
You cant hear me but do you see my raps?
I'm me in-fact, Its really is just so hard for me to truely completly let it go.
I see the trap, My ex girl's acting like she needs me back like i dont know.
But I really dont know if it's the truth.
I'm just really stuck with no clue.
Damn what am I to do? Can I just let it go.
Everything i been through, naw i dont think so.
Too much drama and hate got so much "beef" and no steak.
Running from my problems was just my biggest mistake.
You got beef let it go? i know you see my raps.
Just so you know, everything i spit is facts.
i know in fact, all of this drama and hate aint needed.
All of these rats, bring trash to the plate cant you see it?
So get off my dick you should really let it go.
Fuck this freestyle i'm out yo.

Leave feed if you want..if you do you do....if you dont you dont...yup...and wildbill...i'll call you out when i get the chance of not being busy...been real busy alot of shit i gotta deal wit...oh yeah my cousin might end up dropping a recording on here on my name..i gave him my password and shit...he might also talk to you..i dunno dont care much what he does...iight yo peace[and my cousin has been stayin here so its gonna be same ip so dont be like oh thats thaphantom]
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by Khan »

you keep improving every time i read something new from you

Good Work Phatom, Keep This Shit Coming.
And Keep Improving.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

nice verse, inhancin ya rhymes a bit piece by piece kid, jus like i said in the other on i left in you need to work on structure young homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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