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Omega Bill
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Quick freestyle I typed up

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It was a freestyle with no structure but I put dividers in that way it was easier to read, just kept writing, there is a storyline though.

Girl stuck in here country but U.S aint all bout glits and glam, she wanna buy a plane ticket to get away from her from her fam, first class all fair ride to the N-Y-C, but that place is home to the signs readin R.I.P.

Newspapers readin guns are abroad, and the death rate is so high its like theres no god, cant no one run from a heat seeking bullet, and if you stare at someone the wrong way he wont blick when he pulls it.

Cause livin the life here aint living, more like take what you can get cause nothin is given, and people just cant grasp the concept of humanity, theyd rather be stereotyped as a hard nigga when its all humility.

Kids losin their sanity cause they have to run home from school, cause their buses get shot up from the cats in the van actin a fool, and moms is crying everyday cause her baby is long done, and how are parents sposed to lay back when they cant replace a son.

So a riot will erupt and the tensions burns like a heater, and that aint even the start of violence cause men dont care about their women an jus beat her, and that shit aint right and them boys should be hanged, but when they're at home, in the streets you still hear them shots get banged
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Post by LadySam »

such a brilliant inspirer i am. i think it was pretty good for a freestyle.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

this was pretty nice for a freestyle.
piece was straight, i could catch onto ya flow which is good.
This some real shit too.
Keep up.
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Post by Arvincible »

Cause livin the life here aint living, more like take what you can get cause nothin is given, and people just cant grasp the concept of humanity, theyd rather be stereotyped as a hard nigga when its all humility.

the best u had chained here

so how much is your style? FREE hahaha nigga
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